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That was a really good story lilpippin! I just want to find something out though, did Elrond eat ALL of that food? If he did, could you write what happened?Thanks! Silvertree

LOL!!! Poor Elrond. Reminds me of Thanksgiving dinner. You're bursting to full already and there's still one more meal to go. Glad to see things have been mended between Estel, the twins and their Glorfy. This has been a wonderful read. Keep it up!!

Very nice... Even at an early age it seems Estel can hide and not be noticed. He is finally reunited with Elrond and he feels safe again...A nice story,please continue...

Nice...It shows the love he has for the one he knows as his father...Keep up the good work...

Very nice story about aragorn as a child being raised by Elrond... He has lost his mother,but they seem to love him dearly. A bundle of energy.... Great job...

Sounds like everyone in Rivendell needs a good hug and maybe a brownie a la mode! Keep serving it up, lilpippin!

Aw! So cute! I love Estel and I love Elrond! Looking forward to more!

Hi. Don't worry about your chapter length: everyone's writing style is different. I am not a horse person, but I think you should talk to someone who is, or read up on horses -- maybe beginning with an encyclopedia article or an introductory book for children (both are painless ways to learn basic info about a new topic). Horses and ponies are different animals: same basic shape, but different sizes (and almost certainly other differences I'm not aware of). So a young horse would not be called a pony (there are various terms for young horses, but I'm not going to expose my ignorance by citing a word which refers to a young horse at the wrong age -- and I think the animal's gender matters too!). Children who learn to ride at an early age are usually started on ponies because the animal's size is a better fit for such a small child (just as hobbits ride ponies because horses are too large for them). And neither ponies nor horses are all the same size: there are larger and smaller ones, just as there are taller and shorter humans. Also, this would *not* be Glorfindel's horse Asfaloth, because horses only live to about age 30, and usually aren't ridden for the last few years of their lives. Remember that it is still more than 80 years from the time of your story until FotR: so this horse's name probably shouldn't be Asfaloth, unless Glorfindel makes a point of repeating names (or whomever names horses at Rivendell). Can't help you with the Sindarin, but there'll be someone else who can. Good luck.

Are you aware that Aragorn's father was just a ranger and not king of Gondor?

Hi Lilpippin, Good beginning. I know a lot of people have done "young" estel stories but I alway enjoy other people's take on it. One suggestion would be to just double check your sentences, there were a few that I had to read a couple of times to get the meaning. (take this suggestion with a grain of salt, as I am definitely not a language whiz.) I look forward to more, UPDATE SOON!!