Now this is a different sort of tale! But it's well written and really an enjoyable read - the dialogue flows nicely and true to all the characters. I think you did a good job conveying everyone's reactions - Pippin being a bit lecherous is a nice break from the overly sweet childlike tween that is so common in Hobbit stories. And I'm very glad that you included Legolas' observation that for Elves sex is far more spiritual; a sacred act. That's very in keeping with Tolkien's vision.
I'll be interested to see where you go with this.
Dayna
· 22 January 2005
· Chapter 1: Chapter One
Ho ho! Naughty Steward! Naughty Hobbits! (Mr. Frodo!)Naughty Elf and Dwarf! LOL hee hee hee!! I can't WAIT for Chapter 2! Good Job, Regina! It'll be interesting to see where you take this!
God help them if Eowyn finds out!
Raksha The Demon
· 22 January 2005
· Chapter 1: Chapter One
So far so good! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hope that all the hobbits and the dwarf and elf don't drink Faramir under the table; other fine stories to the contrary, I don't believe that he has low tolerance for alcohol.
I wonder if they'll run into anyone else we know at the House of Crimson Joys...
ponypetter
· 22 January 2005
· Chapter 1: Chapter One
"The House of Crimson Joys." *Snort*
I think Farimir will have an amusing time in the red light district with four hobbits, a dwarf, and an elf. Interesting.
You've got me curious.