Silma
· 4 March 2005
· Chapter 1: Shadowed Light
And so it was, and came to be
in shadowed light I longue to Thee
But while the fairest of the elves
Lady Undomniel still dwells
in Middle-Earth, so long I keep
my grief inside, burry it deep
... ;)
Your poem moves me deeply, Avalon. Wonderful!
Author's reply
Thank you, and WOW! Did you write that? It was beautiful. Another poet, I see!
docmon
· 2 March 2005
· Chapter 1: Shadowed Light
I really enjoyed this! Not only the tempo but the tone. It was filled with grief and longing. I definitely got the feel of someone looking at a glimpse of a world they'll never see. Wonderful job.
Author's reply
Thanks! The tempo was actually a little difficult to keep, and I struggled with this for about an hour. I'm happy that you enjoyed it.
shirebound
· 2 March 2005
· Chapter 1: Shadowed Light
That is absolutely, utterly beautiful. You should be very proud of this. I was going to highlight the very best lines, but they're all amazing.
*awestruck*
Author's reply
Thank you! (blushes) That's really sweet. I don't really like my poems, so I appreciate your kind words.