Nerdanel · 22 May 2005 · Chapter 1: Lament
This is beautiful! And it is so sad as well. I have always felt sorry for Daeron, although I've never really understood him completely. You use an interesting rhyme scheme in this. I really like it.
Author's reply
I'm happy you enjoyed it. I always felt bad for Daeron, because I think what he did was more his way of trying to protect Luthien from death and darkness rather than acts of malice. I believe he did those things out of love. I enjoy experimenting with rhyme and poetry. Thank you very much!