elliska · 20 March 2005 · Chapter 1
Very nice. I liked it. I especially liked: ‘Twas not a fall, but an autumn fair. A true king he was, not merely an heir, His mission: to rule Gondor the fair. Might want to fix the captial I in LIfe in the title (stupid sticky computer keys) and 'strength' in the last line of the first stanza. But I don't say that to be critical (but because I alway hope people point out the stupid mechanical thing to me). This was very nicely done and reads well.