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how poignant. the beauty in the words and descriptions of the "silver strength" of his voice made it bittersweet as well. very well done!

This is incredibly lovely! It has such an essence of haunting beauty and deep regret about it. The silver strength of keening voice, you give out as you roam, The answering voice of silver stars – oh, wilt thou not go home? Those last two lines are so gripping and plaintive, like the bright clear call of a horn that may not be heeded. Thank you for such a moving piece of work! Blessings, Eruanna