spinster
· 4 May 2015
· Chapter 14: The Day Our Lives Changed Forever
You are BRILLIANT! This is the first time I have read anyone dealing with the volcanic output of Mount Doom. I have often wondered how the post Ring-War folks dealt with the 'volcanic winter' that the eruption caused. The West Wind of the Valar was a stroke of genius. Great story too. Thanks
Author's reply
Gee, thank you. My dream is to write a story where Faramir, Eowyn, and other residents of Minas Tirith journey into Mordor five years after the big eruption. I've been fascinated with volcanoes, ever since my dad told me about Mt Vesuvius, which erupted while he was stationed in Italy during WWII. I have done easy hikes on Kilauea and Haleakala volcanoes in Hawaii, and Mount Shasta and Mount Lassen here in California. This January I finally got to see the three famous volcanoes of New Zealand. Yeah, these are the ones Peter Jackson used in LOTR and The Hobbit. Next fall I hope to finally see Mount St. Helens. So maybe I can finally show Faramir and Eowyn's reaction to the devastation of Mt. Doom close hand.
irene
· 12 September 2007
· Chapter 23: The Steward, the Lady, and the King
I absolutely loved your "Steffverse"! Since I am neither a purist nor too fond of AU this is the perfect balance to me. Well, I hate movie-Éowyn - stupid little doll - but you managed to give her profile and character. As for Faramir, you know -- I remember a discussion on the net where one stated: `Faramir is a ranger.Aragorn is a ranger. Both live in the wild. Both sleep on the ground. How come Aragorn always looks he would need a bath and Faramir not´? Therefore, my only complaint is your dirty Faramir...
I'm waiting for the epilogue but I want to thank you now for a most enjoyable read. Hopefully, you have a new story somewhere back in that clever brain of yours!
Thank you, and NOT goodbye...
Irene
Author's reply
Hi Irene -
I really appreciate your support as I moved along, and hope that "Avoidance" ended nicely for you. There were four major avoiders in "Avoidance." Three of them had to have a confrontation before the story could end. The fourth "avoider" was Aragorn, of course, and he needed his moment of realization. That is in "Hope Comes for Estel."
Stay tuned for the "Avoidance" Epilogue. And yes, I do have some more ideas for stories. For me, as always, the stuff I have to write for my job comes first. Nevertheless, my LOTR fanfic writing and reading finds time in my life.
Thanks to all for reading "Avoidance."
- Steff
Linda Hoyland
· 12 August 2007
· Chapter 23: The Steward, the Lady, and the King
You had me laughing out loud here.
I liked the way you showed Eomer's hurt over his sister's refusal to come to Cormallen, something I fear I have overlooked in my stories,which is very plausible. Faramir is a very clever man.
Thank you for your kind words in your notes.I am greatly enjoying this story, even though,as a Tolkien purist, I don't agree with everything,but it is a very good read and I've laughed the most over what I don't think Tolkien would like!
Author's reply
Hi Linda -
You said:
even though,as a Tolkien purist, I don't agree with everything,but it is a very good read and I've laughed the most over what I don't think Tolkien would like!
Well that comment got me laughing. I'm sure my story must have Tolkien rolling in his grave. I hope it's with laughter. I must admit I got a kick writing all those canon infringements. If I go to heaven and meet Tolkien there, I'd be in deep and serious trouble.
- Steff
Raksha The Demon
· 10 August 2007
· Chapter 23: The Steward, the Lady, and the King
I felt sorry for Eowyn here, caught between those two macho reprobates; but she certainly got most of her own back.
I had to LOL at Eomer's loud demands to know if Eowyn and Faramir had SEX, and Faramir's angry (justifiably) reply that it was none of his business. And then of course, the guys talk about beer and courage and become buddies.
The story has been great fun to read the whole way through. I look forward to the epilogue; and congratulations on reaching the ending.
Author's reply
Thanks Raksha, and I couldn't a done it without your help.
I've been waiting over a year to finally write the show down between these three, and must say I had a lot of fun composing it. So many people have written the initial meeting between Faramir and Eomer as confrontational. But I thought these two might get along famously, after getting a few sensitive issues out of the way--such as will Faramir be a good husband and perfect match for Eowyn. They both are powerful war captains who appreciate a tasty tankard of ale :) (how "guy" like).
The Epilogue, which is about one third written, contains the Coronation scene from Eowyn's POV, which a few people have asked me to write. The other scene, of course, is the finale of the big shower that Faramir and Arwen have held for Eowyn. Both have some surprises that I think give a nice closure to "Avoidance."
Again, thanks for your support, hope you and all the quiet masses that I know have read "Avoidance" had lots of fun, a few shocks at my, uh, interpretation of book and movie canon, and LOLs in the appropriate scenes.
- Steff
Raksha The Demon
· 11 July 2007
· Chapter 22: Betrothed
A pleasant, anticipatory chapter. I loved the part where Eowyn was cataloguing Faramir's various scars, seeing if everything was in working order. But the woman has got to be careful about how she words things - lost her virginity to a horse indeed!
Author's reply
She was being rustic, wasn't she :) . I hope you didn't mind that I did, indeed "get a room" for her and Faramir.
Thanks for keeping up with this.
- Steff
Linda Hoyland
· 10 July 2007
· Chapter 22: Betrothed
This chapter made me smile,though I do consider your Faramir and Eowyn AU to Tolkien in their behaviour, though you give plausible reasons.
DEspite my reservations I was amused by Eowyn "mapping " Faramir and her comments about horses, very Rohirric !I'm sure all lady readers sympathise by the end.
Author's reply
That's right. The ethics that my Faramir and Eowyn adhere to are AU, as I have cautioned readers. Earlier chapters in "Avoidance" actually allude to the moral code in Rohan that Eowyn goes by. However, since it's taken me so long to write this story, I probably should give people references to the chapters where Eowyn discusses Rohan's common laws regarding marriage customs, pre-marital sex, and nude bathing. These laws have nothing to do with Tolkien and Jackson, totally my invention, though I hope people will find it less weird than the many "pairings" on other fanfiction sites.
Re: Eowyn's mapping Faramir's body, heck, she's had a great deal of practice as a healer by now. She's seen a lot of bodies, male and female, by this time, and can't but help assess the state of her fiance's health. What a mother Eowyn is going to make!
Thanks for reading, Linda and supporting this tale.
- Steff
Linda Hoyland
· 20 June 2007
· Chapter 21: A Pledge Made and a Wish Fulfilled
I loved the kitten here.
I think Tolkien's Faramir and Eowyn would wait for marriage.
I eagerly await seeing what the King and Steward will say at the party.
Author's reply
Hi Linda -
I think most people will agree with you about Tolkien's Faramir and Eowyn. That's why I said in my blurb on the Stories of Arda home page, "Tolkien didn't write this scene. Jackson didn't film it. It's my chapter alone and you may consider it AU." I realize that I took a big, big chance by implying that my characters consummated their love before marriage. I've read a great deal of Tolkien and have yet to find anything in his stories that defines a strict moral code for his human peoples. And then there was the story I recently read, set in Middle Earth, where a man unknowingly marries his sister. Sibcest Fanfic? Nah, Children of Hurin.
If it's some consolation for anyone who might be disappointed that I put my couple in bed before the wedding night, trust me that I did not write this to give F and E a gratituous sex scene (discretely "off stage," to honor the PG-13 rating). There was considerably more at stake the end of this chapter than mutual lust and Eowyn's ticking biological clock. In the next chapter, you'll find out why Eowyn realized she could "no longer wait."
But anyway, Linda, thanks for hanging in with me this far, even though what i write might be very atypical among Tolkien fanfic.
- Steff
Author Reply: Hi Linda -
I think most people will agree with you about Tolkien's Faramir and Eowyn. That's why I said in my blurb on the Stories of Arda home page, "Tolkien didn't write this scene. Jackson didn't film it. It's my chapter alone and you may consider it AU." I realize that I took a big, big chance by implying that my characters consummated their love before marriage. I've read a great deal of Tolkien and have yet to find anything in his stories that defines a strict moral code for his human peoples. And then there was the story I recently read, set in Middle Earth, where a man unknowingly marries his sister. Sibcest Fanfic? Nah, Children of Hurin.
If it's some consolation for anyone who might be disappointed that I put my couple in bed before the wedding night, trust me that I did not write this to give F and E a gratituous sex scene (discretely "off stage," to honor the PG-13 rating). There was considerably more at stake the end of this chapter than mutual lust and Eowyn's ticking biological clock. In the next chapter, you'll find out why Eowyn realized she could "no longer wait."
But anyway, Linda, thanks for hanging in with me this far, even though what i write might be very atypical among Tolkien fanfic.
- Steff
utfrog98
· 16 June 2007
· Chapter 21: A Pledge Made and a Wish Fulfilled
I do hope you plan to give us all the verses to the song!
This is a very well done story and very realistic.
Thank you
Author's reply
Thanks, utfrog98.
I've been thinking long and hard about that song, but I'm not much of a poet. We'll see. I might just take the easy way out and give a line or two. Cross your fingers for me.
- Steff
irene
· 4 May 2007
· Chapter 20: What Faramir Was Avoiding
Fine that you decided to continue! This story is too good to be left unfinished.
"...a bottle with all the milk gone" -what a wonderful phrase!
By now, you should be used to my "buts"; here is one more:
Since you follow the movie-verse I have to point out that Aragorn flirted shamelessly with Éowyn. Of course, she told him soon that she loved him and h told her that he didn't. So, why he now is astonished she's avoiding him is beyond me. Maybe he isn't the brightest blade in the armory, but more, his character lacks decency. Oh well, I never
liked movie-Aragorn.
Continue, please! Good luck!
Irene
Author's reply
I'm so glad you are following "Avoidance," Irene. And, as you know, I love your reviews. You say that Aragorn flirted shamelessly with Eowyn in the film. I think that's a matter of interpretation.
I'm a big fan of Aragorn, book and film. Someday I want to write a short tale starring him. I think film Aragorn flirted harmlessly (from his point of view), not shamelessly. Eowyn is the one who wore her foolish heart on her sleeve, in regard to Aragorn. When you say Aragorn isn't the brightest blade in the armory, I agree, but only in regard to his knowledge of females. Remember that he's been engaged and reasonably faithful to a "she-elf" for longer than Eowyn has been alive. In the Steff verse, Faramir would be far more woman savvy than Aragorn, which I realize is a violation of prevailing fanon, but so be it. At any rate, Faramir would have had more opportunities as a young'un for romance with human females than Aragorn, raised in Rivendell among the Eldar folk.
As far as Aragorn being astonished at Eowyn's avoidance behavior two years after the Coronation, in the first few chapters of Avoidance (now two years on SoA!!) we find out that Aragorn hasn't really been in Gondor for a good part of his reign. He's left administration of Gondor to Faramir, Imrahil, and Hurin, the Keeper of the Keys. He's never really had a chance to just TALK with Eowyn about her crush. And the few times that he's tried to meet with her on a personal level, she's not only been too scared to confront him but also very afraid of how jealous Faramir would take it if she did. This is the crux of "Avoidance," which I've just laid out to you.
BTW, I should have the next chapter up in the next week or two.
- Steff
Linda Hoyland
· 30 April 2007
· Chapter 20: What Faramir Was Avoiding
I enjoyed Aragorn and Faramir's conversation.Faramir badly needed to ask that question.
Author's reply
No kidding. He'd been avoiding the issue for several years and it was starting to affect his marriage. It's funny how I named this story "Avoidance" three years ago and have finally gotten to the the part where the protaganists face what they've been avoiding.
Thanks for following along and supporting this story. The last few chapters will have much more Aragorn. I hope you enjoy how I portray him. (He's a big fave of mine, if that's not apparent already!)
- Steff
Raksha The Demon
· 10 April 2007
· Chapter 20: What Faramir Was Avoiding
Faramir and Eowyn really need to get a room! They certainly have very healthy-er-appetites.
I suppose this Aragorn had thought, at Cormallen, since the story has many elements of the movie, that Arwen was heading into the West, so he might as well marry Eomer's attractive sister.
Looking forward to finding out if I'm right, or Aragorn had other reasons for considering marrying Eowyn.
Author's reply
Hi Raksha -
Oh, how I agree about Faramir and Eowyn. Their interest in one another is very much the Steffverse, so I pray you all indulge me in this.
Yes, Aragorn is very much the Movieverse Aragorn. Remember that Elrond made a surprise appearance at the Muster of Rohan to tell Aragorn that Arwen had not left, that her fate was tied to that of Middle Earth (whatever that means). Movie Aragorn knew his love hadn't gone West. What he didn't know was if the terrible war of the ring had claimed her life.
Aw heck, you'll learn more in the next chapter.
Thanks for being so encouraging to me.
- Steff
Larner
· 10 April 2007
· Chapter 4: Becoming the Steward
Yes, PJ missed out on that one. To have left out Tom Bombadil and Imrahil was a grief, I've always felt.
Poor Faramir frightened himself? Poor lad!
Author's reply
I'm there in regard to Imrahil!
I liked doing him so much in this chapter that I gave him a significant role in getting Faramir and Eowyn together, much later in "Avoidance." I hope to do lots more with Imrahil in future stories.
- Steff
Larner
· 10 April 2007
· Chapter 3: The Power of Dreams in Darkness
What a commission--to follow Frodo with his mind and dreams! And he has felt the probing of the Orthanc stone by Aragorn? Interesting. And he has had his first glimpse of his future brother-in-law! Excellent!
Interesting Merry revived so very quickly, but then we don't have that explained in movie-verse.
Author's reply
Hi Larner -
Glad to see that you are continuing on. You're just about to get to some of my favorite chapters.
Re: following Frodo in his dreams.
Faramir's farsight became a theme I returned to again and again in Avoidance. In fact, the chapter I just finished, "What Faramir Was Avoiding" and the finale that I planned have interesting resolutions to Faramir's attempts to use farsight.
Larner
· 10 April 2007
· Chapter 2: Eowyn's Dreams of Glory
Poor lass--betrayed by her body, in desperate need of rest to heal, and a good glass of a fine wine. And in her dreams she manages to capture the heart of the King--or so she thinks.
Larner
· 10 April 2007
· Chapter 1: What Was It in the Past?
Very much in character, although she appears to have inherited her uncle's unfortunate movie-tendency to think things that aren't going to happen as stated. Oh, if she only knew the true love she'd find! Heh!
Author's reply
Thanks, Larner. I'm glad that you found my portrayal of Eowyn true to her movieverse character. That's proof I'm doing the job I set out to do with this story.
- Steff
Larner
· 10 April 2007
· Chapter 0: Avoiding the Obvious and the Not So Obvious
A most interesting reason to go movie-verse here. Now to see how Faramir comes to realize the truth of the statement he didn't stay to hear.
Author's reply
Hi Larner -
Welcome to the world of Avoidance.
I went movieverse for this story, originally to fill my own desire to see more of Faramir and Eowyn than we were given in the films. I started Avoidance almost three years ago, so it's been a long, unveiling process, almost at an end.
Thanks for reading. I hope Avoidance continues to hold your interest.
- Steff
Shieldmaiden of Rohan
· 10 April 2007
· Chapter 20: What Faramir Was Avoiding
Good to see another chapter from this, finally, and Eowyn's obvious warming towards Faramir. I also enjoyed the conversation between Frodo and Faramir-- I'd just been thinking about that the other day, what could have passed between them at their reunion, so it was good to read your take on it.
I'm also intrigued by Aragorn's statement at the end, and looking forward to seeing what comes of that.
One question I do have about this is referring to Lothiriel as Faramir's niece-- I know she was a lot younger than him, so I'm wondering if this is some Middle-earth terminology for cousin that you're using.
Author's reply
Thanks, SMOR and xiaoweisan.
NIECE is a horrible boo boo on my part, which i will fix as soon as I am finished with this response. I was in an extreme rush to get Avoidance out the door because I had procrastinated for so long in getting it out. I didn't have it Beta'd.
SMOR, it's really good to hear from you. I'm glad to see you are still reading Avoidance. I look forward to seeing your tales on SOA. Don't be a stranger.
It was really difficult for me to write Frodo and Faramir. That's where I got hung up for two months :) I'd love to see your take on Frodo and Faramir, BTW.
- Steff
xiaoweisan
· 10 April 2007
· Chapter 20: What Faramir Was Avoiding
Quote:
"My NIECE Lothiriel is an advocate's assistant."
Surely "niece" was a slip of the pen?
Author's reply
Hey xiaoweisan -
Lothiriel has returned to being Faramir's young cousin. Thanks for finding this error and for reading Avoidance.
- Steff
Linda Hoyland
· 30 December 2006
· Chapter 19: What Eowyn Was Avoiding
I feel for poor Arwen having to learn what happens to human women at such an advanced age! How lovely the babies will be close together !
Author's reply
When I did my annual viewing of the LOTR trilogy films last week, I thought about where in the films Arwen would experience her first period on the human, rather than elven cycle. It would make a good story, wouldn't it, Arwen having mild or non-existent elven cramps, and then suddenly have full-blown menstral agonies every month. Poor thing quickly learns the agony of being human and female.
I have to get me a real life !!
Thanks for your kind words, Linda.
- Stef
chibi_kaz
· 28 December 2006
· Chapter 19: What Eowyn Was Avoiding
Yay! I get back from a computer-less vacation to find a new chapter! Hurrah! But this cannot be the end, because the question has not been fully answered -- when did Eowyn realize she truly loved Faramir? Sure, probably during the proposal, but she never SAID the words, and that's what Faramir wanted to know in the beginning....
Cheers on a job well done! This is a great fic.
Author's reply
Hi Chibi -
Welcome back. My company is closed this week, which should mean no computers, but I've been spending some of my time reading the lovely fanfics on this site.
As far as Eowyn's realization of when she first loved Faramir, well, I do have to have a finale, don't I? And sorry but that realization and the finale is coming up shortly. I knew the story's conclusion would begin with Eowyn and Arwen having their first private conversation. But it took 20 evolving chapters for me to decide the content of that private conversation: Arwen asking Eowyn for medical assistance. The next chapter has Faramir coming to terms with issues with his wife and especially his, ahem, boss.
Do F & E live happily ever after? Tolkien doesn't tell us. And since I am intentionally making my characters more realistic (film verse) than heroic, in the style of Tolkien, Faramir and Eowyn have their ups and downs, just like real life couples.
Thanks for your support!
- Steff
RS
· 26 December 2006
· Chapter 19: What Eowyn Was Avoiding
Hello!
This is the first story that I have read that has Eowyn and Faramir as the main characters (I love Aragorn stories, especially with Arwen in them!). But I've been popping my little ol' nose in each update and found myself very intrigued.
I've enjoyed this immensely so far. I do wish that PJ elaborated more with Faramir and Eowyn's story as Faramir's character was so endearing. This gap filler is truly excellent and is very satisfying. You've truly kept my interest up. Bravo! Keep up the good work.
Happy Holidays!
PS - I'm very interested to know your take on Arwen "becoming mortal". I would definitely read that piece.
Author's reply
Why thank you, RS. I'm glad that "Avoidance" has held your interest for so long.
Regarding Arwen becoming mortal, I've never written anything on that subject other than the little paragraph near the conclusion of "What Eowyn Was Avoiding." I've wanted to do a brief Arwen fic on that subject for awhile. But first, I need to bite the bullet and conclude "Avoidance."
I'm glad that you and many other people are still hanging in with me.
- Steff
Raksha The Demon
· 26 December 2006
· Chapter 19: What Eowyn Was Avoiding
You've written a plausible version of the great Tolkien F/E scene. I loved the Ioreth commentary and Eowyn's response. One wonders if Faramir and Eowyn will, now betrothed, go off and play "doctor" in some quiet corner.
Good re-introduction of Aragorn and Arwen as a King and Queen who are approachable as well as powerful. I liked Aragorn and Faramir's rapport; and Arwen's efforts to reach out to Eowyn.
It's quite possible that Arwen's transition to mortality began with the onset of her courses.
Author's reply
Hi Raksha -
Happy holidays to you!
Whew. I'm relieved that you find my "take" on F/E reasonably believable. You say:
"One wonders if Faramir and Eowyn will, now betrothed, go off and play "doctor" in some quiet corner."
All I can say is, the next chapter will wrap matters up and show what Faramir was avoiding. He and Eowyn's increasing urges to go off in a corner and, uh, cuddle, will certainly drive the poor boy crazy, I suspect.
How Arwen realized that she had become mortal has long been a plot bunny biting at my feet. Maybe some day I'll devote a short take to the elleth and her transition.
- Steff
Shieldmaiden of Rohan
· 26 November 2006
· Chapter 18: Putting Two Together
Hee, now I'm envisioning Imrahil as a Gondorian Yente...
And I loved both Aragorn's reasoning for sending Pippin (right on!) and the rewording of the famous wall scene. The style is definitely your writing, but keeps the spirit of Tolkien's. Looking forward to her response. ;)
Author's reply
Hi SMOR -
Sorry for being so slow to respond. I've been sidetracked by work writing and holiday issues, like everyone else.
Stay tuned for more of the wall scene and some matters that probably never occured to Tolkien, as "Avoidance" draws ever closer to its conclusion. Thanks for your support.
- Steff
Shieldmaiden of Rohan
· 26 November 2006
· Chapter 17: The Acts of the Last Ruling Steward
I keep missing the updates on this one. Grr.
I enjoyed this chapter greatly though-- the part where Faramir was resigned to loving Eowyn no matter who she married (if she did at all) was quite touching, and the part with the cat was cute. (I always thought black cats being bad luck was rather silly anyway, even though I've only had orange tabbies.)
And I think Eowyn's heart is definitely changing in favor of the Steward, even if she doesn't realize it. The cordial note from Eomer was a nice change from what I usually see in fanon too (even my own... but then, Eomer doesn't know that Faramir's actually in love with his sister, not just friends, yet. And I blame the old Farafics community for that particular plot bunny anyway. ;)
Chibi_kaz
· 13 November 2006
· Chapter 18: Putting Two Together
WOOOOOHOOOO!!
(I can't be any more articulate than that - I'm so happy with the updates)
Cheers,
Chibi-Kaz
Author's reply
I'm glad you're happy, Chibi. You might be surprised to know that I think of you sometimes when writing these chapters and hope that you like them. You've covered the same story differently but so well.
Unlike the last few chapters, "Putting Two Together" wrote itself. I've had the idea for it for at least a year. Plus I wanted to get it done before I went to New Jersey to visit my family for Thanksgiving. I've given myself a deadline of December 31st to finish "Avoidance." Don't know if I can, but I'm sure gonna try.
Stay tuned, and thanks for the review.
- Steff