Okay, I have to admit, I started reading this, came to the word mouthiness and then stopped, having written it off as sub-par fanfiction. I came back however and really enjoyed it. It's so funny! It's great, it really is. Even if mouthiness isn't really a word. You've created very entertaining characters. Keep it up. And will we ever learn what the tutor's name is?
Author's reply
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Now on to my overly long reply to your review.
I know mouthiness isn't a word. So you can clap me into the "Deliberate-Violation-of-Known-Grammar-Laws Prison." (Lame attempt at a joke. Please ignore. The muse responsible for this travesty has been sacked.) Anyway, the thing is I have a habit of making up words. Most should never see the light of day, but Elwing liked "mouthiness". She threatened to throw me into a dungeon without books or a computer for twenty years if I edited it out so I gave in and kept it. I mean, how could anyone live without those all-important essentials for twenty years? (In other words, that's me trying to justify my laziness. Silly old me.)
As for the first chapter, it's the roughest out of the three, and I really need to edit. And I will. That is, I'll edit when I can finally get the lazy fix-it section of my brain out of the lounge chair next to the pool and start running on the Treadmill of Thought. (Bad attempt to be funny. Do ignore. The muses responsible have just been thrown into the pits of Mount Doom.)
Thanks for telling me it's funny. I'm honestly not funny in real life so that makes me feel lots better about my sense of humor. I have this fear that I'll end up being one of those pinched, humorless, schoolmarmish (There I go again!), spinsterish (and again) types. So now my fear has been eased a bit.
Thanks muchly for praising my characters. I have this all-consuming fear that I'll create Mary Sues that'll stink up my fic. So I feel much better now.
Will we ever learn what the tutor's name is? I don't know. It's up to Elwing to tell me. Hopefully, she'll mature enough during the course of this fic to tell me. Not that I'm pretending this fic has any deep themes to it. I call it my "Fluffy, Feel-good Fic." It's simply a straight-up diary fic that makes me feel better writing.
Thanks again for the praise and your willingness to review. I feel better when I get a review because that reassures my slightly overblown ego that someone's reading my fic. Thanks again!
Namarie!
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