Elf Friend
· 23 February 2006
· Chapter 7: To Learn His Letters
Aw, that was a tug on the ol' heartstrings! The Gamgees are so awesome! *hugs them all* I've been planning on writing a story about Sam and his mom for a while and this just might have given me the kick in the butt that I need. :)
I love Fred's and Frodo's determination to have Sam learn. He's so lucky to have those two around to fight for him! :) I also liked how you made it clear how much the Gaffer loved Bell. It's so sad that she died so soon. :(
Congrats on this awesome addition to the GamgeeFest Archives! :) I eagerly await the next story!!
Author's reply
This did get a bit more angsty than I thought it would; it was only a matter of time before some angst managed to sneak it's way into this series. ;) Good luck with your story! I look forward to it. :)
Long before Sam was protecting Frodo on the Quest, Frodo was looking out for Sam. Frodo sees Sam as not only a friend, but as a replacement of sorts for the close bond he had with Merry before moving out of Brandy Hall to live in Hobbiton.
Gaffer always wanted to do right by his wife as much as he could. Halfred's persistance was just what he needed to get him to see this last wish through to the end. I wish that my Bell could have lived a little longer also, but I have my reasons for placing her death so early in Sam's life.
Thanks so much for reading and for the review! :)
Bodkin
· 23 February 2006
· Chapter 7: To Learn His Letters
Good for Halfred. He found the right argument in the end. The Gaffer couldn't argue with it - not and remain honest with himself.
Sam is such a sweetie - I loved him holding onto his brother at the beginning. And his pride in his slate. Bilbo will find him a delightfully enthusiastic student, to whom the chance to learn means so much.
Author's reply
Halfred wasn't about to give up. That, as much as everything else, is part of the reason that Gaffer finally caved in. Had Halfred figured out the solution sooner, it wouldn't have had quite the same resonance if Gaffer hadn't seen just how much it meant to Halfred for Sam to learn. He really couldn't argue, not after he told Halfred the truth of the matter, and he'll come to pride Sam's learning in time.
Sam is just the sweetest hobbit there is. Sleeping in that bed all by himself must have been terribly lonely for him and that's likely the only reason Halfred won't be apprenticed off for another year or so, to give Sam time to grow up a bit more and get accustomed to the idea. That slate was the best gift Sam had ever gotten up to this point and he was very proud of it. He's likely to wear Bilbo out with his thirst for knowledge. ;)
Thanks for reading!
Queen Galadriel
· 23 February 2006
· Chapter 7: To Learn His Letters
There are so many variations in fanfic of how the Gaffer might have been persuaded to let Sam learn to read, but this is one of the most poignant. No wonder Hal wanted it so much! The brief description of Bell's last days had me fighting tears. Poor kids!
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
I've read quite a few of those variations myself and I was tempting to use Frodo's argument for making the Gaffer cave in at last (it was inspired by one of the variations that I've read) but, as Halfred pointed out, those blasted post messengers just made that argument impossible. Up to the very point of Gaffer's confession, I really had no clue how this was going to resolve itself and I was beginning to fear that Sam might never get to learn to read!
I haven't done a story about Bell's death yet, simply because I don't think even I can handle that much angst. This brief glimpse was sad enough, but it does make it clear why Halfred would want to see his mother's wishes fulfilled, especially after he learns the reason that Bell wanted it in the first place.
Thanks for reading and for all your lovely reviews! :)
Oh, this was a joy to read! It brings back so many memories of scavenger hunts I had when I was little with friends and classmates. And Goldie's kissing tree reminded me so much of you-know-what song! LOL!
My, I've been watching and still I missed this one when you added it. I'll have to be sure I get notes when you update. Thought I had, but I guess I didn't.
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
I'm so glad this was able to remind you of something in your own life. ^_^ Scavenger hunts are a great way of keeping kids occupied and out from under foot, especially when you put things on the list that will be difficult to find. Those parents are pretty tricky, but the Gamgee kids pulled through. ;) LOL, that song should sound familiar, as it's modeled after our own kissing song. I figured that hobbits would have some form of that song that they could tease their older siblings with.
Thanks for reading and for the lovely review! :)
Dreamflower
· 23 February 2006
· Chapter 7: To Learn His Letters
GF, your Halfred is perfectly wonderful! What a marvelous big brother he was, and so persistant, as well! I love the way that Frodo reacted, too, completely supportive of Halfred, even though Bilbo had to be all correct about things.
And--yes--what would Bell have wanted and why did she want it? Once he hit on that particular argument, he was bound to win.
Very sweet story!
Author's reply
Halfred is the picture of Gamgee stubbornness. He wasn't about to give up finding a solution and so I had to keep on writing even though I had no idea what the solution was!
Frodo wanted to see Sam learn just as much as Halfred did, but the real clincher for him was hearing that it had been Bell's wish. Having lost his own mother so young (and at nearly the same age as Halfred was when Bell died), Frodo would understand Fred's desire to fulfill one his mother's last wishes.
Bell had a valid reason for wanting all the children to learn their letters, and it's easy to see why she held on for so long on Sam being allowed to learn. The Gaffer might have been able to dismiss her concerns while she lived, and afterward, he had more important things to worry about, but now he really cannot argue that what she was worried about is unlikely to happen. It's already happened, to a degree. He just needed Halfred's not-so-gentle prodding to get him to admit to that.
Thanks for reading!
Julie
· 23 February 2006
· Chapter 7: To Learn His Letters
This was an absolutely lovely little story & my favorite of the Gamgee series, I think. Your idea of why it was Sam who got to learn his letters was brilliant and extremely well-done. I've always wondered why exactly it was Sam out of the Gaffer's 6 kids that was the only one (that we know of) to learn to read & write. I never really speculated the why's or where's of this, but apparently, you have. You covered all of the bases & made a very sound argument as to why it was Sam, thus creating a very plausible & thouroughly enjoyable tale.
Little Sam practicing his name unbeknownst all this time was the clincher and so adorbale to picture as well. Namarie!
Author's reply
I've been trying to figure out for months now why exactly Gaffer would let Bilbo teach Sam his letters, and even when I started writing this story I still didn't have the answer, which is why this was originally going to just be about Sam's first reading lesson, *after* the Gaffer was talked into it. But Halfred was truly persistant and made me write this story, even though I was as stumped as he was for a solution and I was sincerely hoping those other gardeners and workers would come up with one. Those blasted post messengers indeed! I wanted to strangle them by the time Halfred was moping by the river. And as it turns out, Gaffer had the exact reason he needed the whole time!
I can well imagine Sam sneaking out that slate and chalk and writing his name for practice every time he had the chance. He'll make the most studious pupil Bilbo has ever taught.
Thanks for reading and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)
shirebound
· 22 February 2006
· Chapter 7: To Learn His Letters
This is marvelous. Halfred is as determined, intelligent, and caring about his family as anyone ever has been. What a wonderful brother, and I'm so happy this turned out as it did! I can well imagine every word of this taking place.
Author's reply
Halfred may be the self-proclaimed "trouble maker" of the bunch, but his heart is always in the right place. He wants nothing more than to see all his siblings (and his dad) have everything they could ask for. Even though he knows that isn't a practical possibility, he wanted Sam to have this chance and he eventually found the way to make it happen.
Thanks for reading!
Isilhen Daegol
· 15 February 2006
· Chapter 5: Nibbler
*whines and wimpers* Oh, I want a kitten! I love cats so much, but I've never had one. And Nibbler sounds so adorable! You did a very good job with that, as usual. I always enjoy your stories about the gamgee household. Well, I've got class in a few minutes, so I better get going.
Author's reply
We've always had cats and dogs in my house, but it was years before I had a cat of my own. I couldn't imagine *not* having a cat, and now, the Gamgees couldn't imagine it either. Nibbler worked his way into their hearts and lives so quickly, as kittens are prone to do. Not even the Gaffer was immune to his charms. :) Thanks for reading! I know how busy you are and it always means a lot when you squeeze in the time to read my fics. *hugs*
Larner
· 5 February 2006
· Chapter 6: Scavenger Hunt
A wonderful hunt, although I'm amazed they found flowers growing when snow and ice covered the ground--much less berries ready to fill a basket anywhere but in a greenhouse.
Author's reply
That's what you get when a Californian writes about snow! LOL The snow is more like slush at this point. It *is* melting and spring *is* starting, just too slowly as far as the overly-bored kids are concerned. I doubt the basket for the berries or the bouquet were very big. :)
Thanks for reading!
Larner
· 5 February 2006
· Chapter 5: Nibbler
One minor note--calico, tortoiseshell, and similarly colored cats are almost all females, as the pattern requires TWO genes to occur, and the genes are on the X chromosome. If Nibbler is indeed a male, then he will have a very odd genetic patter--perhaps two X and one Y chromosomes, and will be sterile.
But a wonderful description of the kitten coming into the family and claiming them all, including the irascible Gaffer himself! Lovely!
Author's reply
Poor sterile Nibbler. :P Unless, Daisy was wrong. ~_^
Gaffer couldn't have resisted the kitten's charms forever. Sam knew what he was doing when he put the kitten in his father's lap. A very obvious, but effective, trick. And seeing how happy his kids were with it, and how attached Sam and Goldie became in particular, gave him even more reason to let them keep it. Besides, cats do pretty much take care of themselves, a crucial selling point. :)
Thanks for reading!
shirebound
· 4 February 2006
· Chapter 6: Scavenger Hunt
Your Gamgee clan is so *real*. And I love how they're always including their Gaffer in whatever joy or fun they find.
Author's reply
Gaffer has to be both mother and father to his kids, and so they adore him all the more for it. He's the central most important person in their lives and they simply can't imagine taking a day off and leaving their father behind to work while they're having fun. Gaffer might have protested, but he also can't imagine going an entire day without his kids about.
Thanks for reading!
Bodkin
· 4 February 2006
· Chapter 6: Scavenger Hunt
I love the Gamgees working as a team - and their decision that their victory means a holiday for all of them, including the Gaffer. They are a great family.
This is an interesting tradition to set up - I wonder how it would work in future years, (hint, hint), with swarms of little Gamgees up at Bag End. I reckon Goldilocks would be relentless in trying to secure victory from a team of older siblings!
The aside - of Frodo trying to escape from Myrtle - is most entertaining, as is Sam's incomprehension, but decision to intervene in the future if he sees them together.
I'm glad the Gamgees won.
Author's reply
The Gamgees are the best, so cuddly and fluffy. :) They couldn't imagine not including their father, and Gaffer was rather pleased that they did; he'd be mighty lonely without them about for an entire day.
I'll probably start writing more post-Quest once I'm finished with the two stories I'm currently working on. I'll jot this idea down and see what happens. ^_^
Frodo is ever at the mercy of aggressive lasses! lol He's just so polite and just shy enough around them that he really doesn't stand a chance. Sam doesn't understand why Frodo doesn't want to be around her, but knowing that she makes Frodo uncomfortable is reason enough for him. Sam's always looking after his master. :)
I thought about letting the Gamgees lose. Certainly, if Sam hadn't remembered about the rocks, it would have been a very close race. The rocks were included in the list because the adults figured they would be hardest to find and so the kids would be gone all day trying to locate them. But Sam *is* resourceful and found the rocks, so even with the berry crisis, they won in the end.
Thanks for reading!
Dreamflower
· 2 February 2006
· Chapter 6: Scavenger Hunt
Aw, this is so sweet! I like the idea of an annual scavenger hunt--it seems very hobbity!
The Gamgee children are *so* resourceful and clever! I do love them the way you show them. Just wonderful!
Author's reply
Thanks Dreamflower! (((hugs)))
All the Gamgee children are just so caring of each other, and very good at figuring things out. They each have their own role and they excel at that role brilliantly.
Baggins Babe
· 28 January 2006
· Chapter 5: Nibbler
What a lovely story, and the children certainly know how to get round the Gaffer. I love the way they call him 'Gaffy' too.
Only one thing surprised me - calico cats are always female. Tortoiseshell males occur very, very rarely, and are always sterile. Although perhaps Middle-earth genetics are different? :-))
Author's reply
I figure that "Gaffer" is equal to "Dad" amongst the working class hobbits, and so the very youngest children would call their fathers "Gaffy" just as much as they would "Daddy". :D
90% of 'calico' cats are female, and the males are indeed sterile. So either the Gamgees have themselves a very rare cat, or Daisy was mistaken. hehe Imagine Gaffer's surprise if that cat turns out to be female and has kittens one day! He *did* think he was likely to regret his decision to keep it. ~_^
Thanks for reading, and for that plot bunny you unintentionally sent my way. :)
Bodkin
· 28 January 2006
· Chapter 5: Nibbler
I love the practised pouting. Those kids know how to win over their father.
Mind you, I suspect seeing Marigold and Sam happily absorbed in caring for the kitten worked even better. Not to mention Nibbler's skill in coaxing attention from the Gaffer himself.
Very sweet!
Author's reply
Oh yes, pouting works on even the toughest father's heart. They have their Gaffer wrapped around their little fingers. :)
lol, if they *had* found the owner for that kitten, the Gaffer would have had to go out and find another one. He couldn't really take the kitten away, not after seeing how happy his children were with it, and certainly not after getting a dose of its affections himself. That's a good trick, putting the kitten on his lap. It certainly worked on *my* dad every time. ^_^
Thanks for reading!
Queen Galadriel
· 28 January 2006
· Chapter 5: Nibbler
Awww! How cute! I love the image of Gaffer Gamgee with a kitten sprawled on his lap, completely helpless against its charms. I look forward to more of these!
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
No one can resist a kitten, unless they're completely heartless, which the Gaffer certainly is not. And kittens are tenacious. They'll hunt around for attention until they get it, and little Nibbler wasn't about to give up on the Gaffer.
I'm glad you've enjoyed these. If you haven't had quite enough fluff yet, you might want to check out my "Of Merry and Pippin" ficlets, also posted on this site.
Thanks for reading!
Queen Galadriel
· 28 January 2006
· Chapter 4: Bell
Even after all these years, if he closed his eyes while outside in the rain and concentrated hard enough,
he could almost think he was back in that long ago day, looking down at his Bell as she smiled up at him, reaching out to catch her parasol that, even
to this day, leaned against the wall beside the chair in his bedroom, just in case he needed it.
*wipes eyes* Beautiful. You portray this family so beautiful, and I've come to love them all more deeply, for all I've only been reading for maybe a little less than an hour. And I think maybe I don't mind Bell having died while the children were so young after all. :)
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
The Gaffer is a big soft teddy bear beneath his rough and gruff exterior, and he's always sure to show it to his children. He has to be both mother and father to them, and that would have made him softer and more open during these quiet moments at home. And of course, any time the kids can hear stories of their mother, they'll listen, even if they've heard it a hundred times before.
Thanks for reading and for the lovely review!
Queen Galadriel
· 28 January 2006
· Chapter 3: My First Camp Out
Oh, how fun! Makes me wish I could be out there with them. I used to love ghost stories when I was little, and you've really done an excellent job with these. Had to laugh at "Scalawag," for all I know I shouldn't! :)
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
The hobbits believe in their ghosts. They may not believe outlandish stories from outside their borders, but they do believe that ghosts are sometimes the only explanation for things. :) Scalawag was actually based on a tv special I saw once about ghosts that supposedly haunt this ship (or maybe it was a hotel bar); one of them would blow of a woman's neck if there was a man standing behind her, lol. Blowing on necks is a bit too sensual for hobbits, but who doesn't remember some kid coming along and trying to depants a friend or look up a girl's skirt? It's just innocent enough for hobbits. :)
Thanks for reading!
Queen Galadriel
· 28 January 2006
· Chapter 2: Pork Chops and Apple Sauce
Oh, I love it! I love it! That song was sooo hilarious! LOL! And if I may, I'll be sure and teach that game to my twelve-year-old brother, and the next time we're called upon to entertain the two little ones, we'll play it with them...if they can get the hang of it. :)
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
Feel free to teach your sibs the games. The name game (and many different variations of it) used to keep my friends and I entertained during those long bus rides going to and from band competitions, especially when we could find someone who didn't know the rules (or know that we had changed them!). The singing game was merely borrowed from "Whose Line is it Anyway?" ^_^ As for the song itself, if May hadn't sung her verse, the others would have kept it a bit more respectful, but when May, the stoic rule-keeper, went and got cheeky, it allowed everyone else to do the same. Good thing the Gaffer's a good sport. :)
Thanks for reading!
Queen Galadriel
· 28 January 2006
· Chapter 1: A Hectic Morning
Awww. Typical family, but this is so sweet. I don't usually like fics in which Bell is gone when the children are so young-I think she would have had a big part in who Sam grew to be. But this is definitely an exception, and I can't wait to enjoy every one of the fics in this collection. This just melted my heart:
"Come on, Sam. Mama Daisy will take care of you."
That's so sad, but such a wonderful, big-sisterly thing to say. Poor Daisy, trying to be brave for her little brother. I kind of know how that is, being the eldest of four, two of them just little ones.
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
A very typical family, reminiscent of many such mornings in my own home growing up. In this case, it's mostly because they're still adjusting to the loss of their mother, but it is in part because they are simply that young and will find petty things to argue about.
It was always my impression that Bell died when Sam was very young. He never talks about her in the books, speaking solely of his father, and while he names nearly all of his kids after someone he knows, none of his daughters are named Bell. She may not have passed on *this* early, but I have a good reason for it in my fanon (and one day, I will write that story ^_^) At any rate, the Gaffer does his best to make up for the loss, and their neighbors and friends do what they can also. :)
I do see Daisy as stepping up and taking over the "mom" role for her younger siblings, when she's not threatening May over the ribbon that is! I was the youngest in my own family and can remember many days when my sister would watch my brother and me while our parents were off doing something else. She was sort of a second mom to us.
Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely review!
Dreamflower
· 27 January 2006
· Chapter 5: Nibbler
Oh! *Whee!* I love it! A kitty for the Gamgees--lovely, lovely fluff!
Thank you!
Author's reply
You can't get much fluffier than a little bundle of purring fur. :) Glad this was just what you needed to get you over the angst of your new fic (which I'm very eager to read, btw).
Thanks for reading!
shirebound
· 27 January 2006
· Chapter 5: Nibbler
The children held their breaths and looked up at their father with yearn-filled eyes. “Can we keep it?” May dared to ask. “Please.” And then as one, all four children lowered their heads and peered up at him through their lashes, every one of them pouting.
Gaffer sighed, defeated.
Awwww!!! Nibbler Gamgee! This is just too adorable for words.
And before Hamfast could protest, Sam scooped the little calico up and plopped him onto his father's lap. Nibbler instantly started kneading the Gaffer’s lap, turning its purr up to fill the room again. Hamfast sat stock still, watching the kitten warily, but Nibbler wasn’t having any of that. He had quickly become used to the affectionate attentions of its new siblings, and the kitten wasted no time in nudging its white-and-orange head beneath the Gaffer’s hand and holding it there expectantly. When the Gaffer didn’t move to pet him, Nibbler wriggled his head about, then kneaded the Gaffer’s lap and maneuvered itself until its tiny little body was all but sheltered beneath the Gaffer’s large hand. Then it nipped lightly at a finger and wriggled its head again.
Awwww!! *melts*
Author's reply
Sam knew what he was doing when he put Nibbler on the Gaffer's lap. He knew there was no way his father could resist its charms and he was right! I know it always worked on *my* dad at any rate. And that little trick with the head wriggling is one my cat uses on me all the time, when she feels she's being ignored. :)
Thanks for reading!
RenaissanceGrrl
· 13 January 2006
· Chapter 4: Bell
Oh, the SAP! The WaFF! I loved it.
Author's reply
And I remember what WaFF means! It's so nice to see the grouchy old Gaffer being sweet and mushy for a change. Thanks for the review!
Isilhen Daegol
· 31 December 2005
· Chapter 4: Bell
Oh, how sweet. Bell seems so happy and carefree. That's such a nice story. And I love how Sam wanted to hear about his mother, and how they all know the story by heart. It's just beautiful.
Author's reply
Bell was a good match for steadfast Hamfast. Where he's strict, she's more lenient. Where he's practical, she's whimsical. All the children love hearing stories about their mother, hence why they know the story so well. It's unfortunate that the Fates took Bell away from her family so soon, but her memory will live on for many more years to come.
Isilhen Daegol
· 31 December 2005
· Chapter 3: My First Camp Out
How funny! I love little Sam stories. He was such a serious young hobbit. And very practical. It was so in character about how he placed the "goblins" and "gollums." Good job with it.
Author's reply
Kids are so serious at times, especially about playing games such as this. Sam is no different and all those stories of Bilbo's would have influenced the way he would expect this game to be played. At least he pays attention, even if his friends don't. ^_^