Elanor Silmariën · 17 March 2006 · Chapter 3: In which Frodo had to know…
This is really good! I wasn't brave enough to post the story I wrote where Frodo got married, but this is way better anyways! God bless, Elanor
Walking Wounded by Nina the powerwriter
Reviews (11)
Larner · 12 August 2005 · Chapter 3: In which Frodo had to know…
Quite the meeting, and glad Sam is willing to keep the secret.
Dreamflower · 11 August 2005 · Chapter 3: In which Frodo had to know…
This came out really well! I like the way the changes are incorporated--you may want to fix one thing: there is an unrelated sentence repeated at the end, I think probably because of the italics when you posted--they do that to me sometimes. I've sometimes had whole *paragraphs* relocate themselves that way, LOL!
Andrea · 2 August 2005 · Chapter 2: In which Bilbo would have never believed…
Well, Bilbo certainly only wanted to protect his cousin, but why did he react like that, I wonder? Did he talk of his own experiences, or was it only the concerns of old Gaffer Gamgee? "He stared at the babe, a look of wonder on his face - a strange delight fluttered in his heart. It was then he knew how much he would love this child." It's wonderful to see Frodo holding his little daughter in his arms :) And Rosie does a great job to help him.
Larner · 2 August 2005 · Chapter 2: In which Bilbo would have never believed…
I've so dreamed of Frodo desiring the children he couldn't have--it's nice at times to imagine he did sire at least one child.
Author's reply
That's one reason why I wanted to write this story - to explore how Frodo would reacte to having a child.
Dreamflower · 27 July 2005 · Chapter 1: In which Frodo finds new hope…
You are doing a really good job with this, dear. I'm so glad to see more of it posted! And it looks like I'm not the only one!
Author's reply
Thanks, Barbara! Yeah, maybe I'll get an audience with this story ;)
Larner · 26 July 2005 · Chapter 1: In which Frodo finds new hope…
Sweet images.
Author's reply
Thanks :)
Lotrgirl1415 · 22 July 2005 · Chapter 0: In which Frodo makes a new friend…
I love this story so far and I cnat wait till the next update! superb job hun! *hugs* --Katie
Author's reply
Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Andrea · 18 July 2005 · Chapter 0: In which Frodo makes a new friend…
Now, that sounds interesting! I have found so far a few stories, in which Frodo had a romance, but not a single story in which he actually had a wife! This is definitely AU, but it opens a variety of new perspectives - and speculations, on my part. I'm looking forward to reading more :)
Author's reply
Yeah, I've found a few stories too that have Frodo falling in love, but never have I seen someone take it to the next level. I wanted to experiment and see if it works ;) Thank you so much for reading!
Dreamflower · 18 July 2005 · Chapter 0: In which Frodo makes a new friend…
Oh goody! You went with "Goodchild" which will make her related to Sam on his mother Bell's side! I love how polite and old-fashioned they are with one another.
Larner · 17 July 2005 · Chapter 0: In which Frodo makes a new friend…
Okay, you obviously need to get in there and do some fix-up on your chapter numbers and titles and all, as I found what is obviously the introductory chapter second and a later chapter with what appears to be a good deal left out first. Interesting concepts, and DEFINITELY AU.
Author's reply
No, the chapters are in the right order. I started with present day then did the flashback, and will probably go back and forth in later chapters.