Reviews (14)

Virtuella · 15 November 2008 · Chapter 2: Facing the Future

"I did have an Aunt and Uncle(born about 1900) who were proud of the fact they had never seen each other unclothed in over 50 years of marriage." That makes me quite sad in a way. I've always thought that this was our temporary return to the Garden of Eden: to be naked and not be ashamed...

Virtuella · 13 November 2008 · Chapter 2: Facing the Future

“Aragorn looked both pleased and somewhat bewildered as he pondered on Lady Eowyn’s welcome but alarmingly rapid switch of affections from himself to his Steward.” Lovely and so amusing! I’m not sure I buy the notion that Denethor used to flog Faramir. He was unjust to him and unduly cold, but I don’t see any indication in the books that he was abusive. well, I suppose it’s open to interpretation. However, on thing is for sure: Faramir will eventually have to permit someone to see him naked, and that someone will be Eowyn – how will she react, I wonder? It’s nice how you sneak in the expression “his Faramir” in the last chapter. “He bent to kiss Aragorn’s ring before leaving, in the gesture of respect, that he was accustomed to his father demanding ,and promptly banged his nose against the King’s who had bent towards him at the same instant. “ “We both have the hazard of Numenorean noses!” Yay! This is your wonderful sense of humour, I love it!

Bodkin · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Facing the Future

Poor Faramir. He's not good with authority figures. Unsurprisingly. I'm glad to know that he does develop an affectionate and trusting relationship with Aragorn in time - although I think that, deep down, he's never entirely certain that it will last. He's scarred in worse ways than physically. But he will be happy in the end.

Raksha The Demon · 27 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Shadow of the Past

"Aragorn was starting to get quite light headed from watching all this bobbing around." That's my favorite line in the story. It shows Aragorn's essential honesty and desire for a certain simplicity in his relations with others rather than fripperies and ritual and obeisance. Unfortunately, as King, he's going to have to learn how to handle all of that, but he doesn't need or want it all the time, particularly from his friends.

Larner · 26 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Facing the Future

Nice description of the beginning of the reign of the Lord King Aragorn Elessar.

Larner · 26 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Shadow of the Past

I think I remember reading this on FFN, but it's wonderful to read it now. Poor Faramir, looking at the bad memories and associations he has with these quarters, and now must give over. At least he has one well worthy to follow to assist him in washing those memories away! But to have the final panic hit him--poor lad!

Larner · 26 December 2005 · Chapter 0: A New Beginning

A lovely retelling from Faramir's point of view.

shirebound · 26 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Facing the Future

the long sensitive fingers, suggested a man who might be happier in more peaceful pursuits. That's a wonderfully perceptive thought. He could sense the air of Numenor around Faramir,almost as pure, as it was around himself. You really breathe life into these two Men... so alike in so many ways. A lovely story.

shirebound · 26 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Shadow of the Past

It was very hard to imagine himself being crowned as King ,had Denethor lived. It was unlikely he would have handed over the rod so easily. He had Faramir to thank for his smooth accession to the throne. Now that's a fascinating thought! And oh, how I wish the movie had included the scene of Faramir "surrendering his office" to the new king.

Dreamflower · 8 July 2005 · Chapter 0: A New Beginning

This is a wonderful, completely canon book-verse gap-filler! I really *like* your interpretation of Faramir, as being competent and confident in his tasks, but shy and lacking in self-esteem personally. It would make a good deal of sense, considering how his father treated him, that he would continue for a good long while to see himself mostly through Denethor's eyes. I also like the way he expects formality, and is surprised at the intimacy and friendship Aragorn shows him. Gondor, I think, was a far more formal place than the remnants of the Northern kingdoms. And I also like the way Aragorn reacts to him. Realizing that for some reason, Faramir did not expect to continue as Steward, he finds himself having to coax this person out of himself. It all bodes well for the future of their friendship. Very insightful character study!

shirebound · 7 July 2005 · Chapter 0: A New Beginning

How wonderful. I needed to read something hopeful and positive today, and I just knew this story would be perfect. Thank you.

Legolass · 7 July 2005 · Chapter 0: A New Beginning

Hey Linda! This is Legolass (Q)! :-) I am not particularly fond of Aragorn-Faramir friendship stories, but I just had to read yours. Well written, great! (Could I expect less?)

Kitty · 7 July 2005 · Chapter 0: A New Beginning

You know, it is quite funny how poor Faramir is worried about his proper clothing to meet the King. During the crowning it's ok, but for a talk only? I have the suspicion Aragorn is in his ranger outfit much more comfortable than in formal robes and doesn't truly want all this pomp. Aragorn was starting to get quite light headed from watching all this bobbing around. *lol* I fear it will going to be a hard task for Aragorn to convince Faramir he doesn't need to raise him upon a pedestal, because he wants to be Faramir's friend and not his liege. I am glad Aragorn treats him as his friend, not as his doormat as Denethor has obviously done. It must have been very good for Faramir to be complimented about his organisation of the coronation rather than chastised for something which was probably not even his fault for a change. No doubt Aragorn will befriend his nervous steward in the end, as you've put it.

harrowcat · 7 July 2005 · Chapter 0: A New Beginning

Oh this was poerfect. I thought you caught Faramir's emotions brilliantly. I would love to see more of this and explore how this friendship develops as I bet it wouldn't be plain sailing, Faramir's upbringing wouldn't allow it. Or perhaps a chapter to explore Faramir at the end of his life so that you could explore how the friendship had grown. 'A Final Ending' perhaps?