Reviews of Mysterious Relations

Pip · 14 January 2006 · Chapter 3: An Unexpected Meeting

I like your sroty so far, please update soon, it would be neat to see what happens.

yelena · 17 October 2005 · Chapter 3: An Unexpected Meeting

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH....................AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No, really, it's brilliant. Hurry with chapter four. Please.

hannibul · 21 August 2005 · Chapter 3: An Unexpected Meeting

Hey V!!!!!!!!!!!! I miss u...but that's beside the point. Nice story, so far. I hope you can continue working on it, what with school starting and all. I can't exactly imagine Frodo using the phrase "what's up", but that's just me. are you and kel still working on a story together? that'd turn out really cool, i bet See ya

Andrea · 14 August 2005 · Chapter 3: An Unexpected Meeting

So, his name is Haldamor. He *is* a ranger, isn't he? But what on Middle Earth is the grey-haired hobbit up to? I've really no idea. This story is very mysterious. I stick to it :)

Dreamflower · 13 August 2005 · Chapter 3: An Unexpected Meeting

You have a very exciting beginning to this story!

good_one_pip · 24 July 2005 · Chapter 2: Remedies and Recipes

So far, so good Queen V! Cookbooks! A perfect spare reading material for hobbits. However, you have me worried about Pip and Sam! Don't put Pippin through to much pain, at least for my sake. I could barely read "The Palantir" yesterday, and I don't need anymore trama yet:)

Andrea · 24 July 2005 · Chapter 2: Remedies and Recipes

And the suspense in growing... Merry obviously doesn't see any danger, otherwise he would never have left Pippin's side. A cookbook is very appropriate and a reasonable excuse for both cousins, not to realize that their friends have not returned yet. What will happen next?

yelena · 23 July 2005 · Chapter 2: Remedies and Recipes

Wow! I can't wait to see what happens to poor sam & pippin!

yelena · 23 July 2005 · Chapter 1: The Prancing Pony

Oh, V!!!! I like it! Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Larner · 23 July 2005 · Chapter 2: Remedies and Recipes

How perfect--a Hobbit cookbook? A couple things--Hobbits don't have attics, particularly in one story houses and single-floor tunnel smials. Second, you had them arriving in the rain, but now the sun is shining through the high windows. Perhaps a bit of transition?

Larner · 23 July 2005 · Chapter 1: The Prancing Pony

Okay--Navy blue eyes this time, rather than grey ones. Interesting.

good_one_pip · 23 July 2005 · Chapter 1: The Prancing Pony

This looks quite promising Mer! You've already told me a little about the plot, and I'm looking forward to your first chapter-story on Arda! Maybe one of these days I'll be able to get one of my own stories up. Until then, I'm going to enjoy reading yours. I like how you made the Prancing Pony a fun place to be. PJ made it too dark in the movie.

Andrea · 23 July 2005 · Chapter 1: The Prancing Pony

An interesting start! Somehow I have the feeling that dark-cloaked figure in the corner is not the bad guy. He reminds me strongly of Strider! Strider it can't be, but maybe a Dunadan? This story surely isn't complete, but it's stated as "complete". Maybe, you would like to change it. I'm looking forward to reading more!

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