Larner
· 2 August 2005
· Chapter 2: Close to Comfort - Part One -
Oh--nice cliffhanger. Now, to see how Aragorn recovers and Gollum is at last recaptured.
Author's reply
That - I think - is the only 'bad thing' about writing a gap-filler: the end is quite clear. But I hope to entertain you in spite of that certainty.
- T.
fliewatuet
· 24 July 2005
· Chapter 1: Into the Dead Marshes
I am curious as to your take on one of my favourite 'gaps' in Tolkien's stories. And this was an interesting start.
Author's reply
Hi fliwatuet,
great to see you here! My attempt to fill a gap will take quite a turn, promised. I hope to keep you interested.
Cheers,
- T.
grumpy
· 22 July 2005
· Chapter 1: Into the Dead Marshes
Great to see another story from you, and a good start. Sure did like Aragorn's down and out tussle for Gollum, who seems to be a very nasty creature. Looking foward to seeing what happens next.
Author's reply
Great to see you reviewing it ! Welcome to this story, grumpy, and I hope I can fulfill your expectations.
- T.
Larner
· 21 July 2005
· Chapter 1: Into the Dead Marshes
Ooh, how tricksy our Gollum is, throwing the brooch into the pool and causing Frodo's movie-verse fall to happen to Aragorn.
Well started, Timmy!
Author's reply
Yes, I just couldn't stop myself from using that image. Thank you very much that you liked the start.
- T.
meckinock
· 21 July 2005
· Chapter 1: Into the Dead Marshes
Wonderfully creepy description of the Dead Marshes, a wonderfully creepy and clever Gollum, and a wonderfully grim and determined Aragorn. All the elements of a great story! I'm looking forward to seeing how Gollum is going to handle his predicament.
Author's reply
Thanks for your review. Gollum should be clever, but he's also mean. Well, he will truly handle this mishap!
- T.
Laerien
· 21 July 2005
· Chapter 1: Into the Dead Marshes
I loved it! You portrayed Gollam in a way even I liked.
The idea of the brooch way brilliant! Now, the poor creature has to pull out 'the wanderer' :o)?
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's reply
Hey, thanks for *that* kind of praise. Didn't think that Gollum would be in any way likable . The story's complete on my PC, so posting chapters will be frequent.
- T.