Swallowing Sorrows by Ariel
Larner · 29 April 2005 · Chapter 1: Swallowing Sorrows
Yes, I can see this. We do have a similar vision of Frodo's choices for his ending.
Author's reply
Yes, I thought so when I read your piece too. Thanks for your review - and your work! I haven't found a new (to me) author of your skill in a long time and I am enjoying reading through your portfolio!
niniel · 7 January 2004 · Chapter 1: Swallowing Sorrows
Great job, Ariel and very well written. It seems you have a great understanding for Frodo and for who and what he is. Enjoyed myself a lot. Thanks for sharing.
jodancingtree · 11 September 2003 · Chapter 1: Swallowing Sorrows
Oh, Ariel, this is lovely. I read it a long time ago and liked it -- I'm sorry if I didn't say so at the time! But I just read it again this morning and it's just beautiful. I think you've changed it some, since I read it before -- made Frodo less self-pitying, more loving and wise -- and it's even better this way. Brava! jo