mirax · 12 August 2005 · Chapter 0: Strained Relations
i love this chapter it looks to me a very interesting begining for a story, i'm afraid aragorn is going to have a very dificult travel with those two, but i hope it will be worth the effort, i will love to read more of this, but i think it's a pity arwen doesn't go with them, the contrast between both couples in the travel would have been very interesting, it's an opinion anyway, very personal because i like aragorn-arwen stories, i will be waiting for the next chapter. mirax
Author's reply
Thank you so much for your kind review.I hope you will continue to enjoy the story despite Arwen's absence.Being pregnant it would be too dangerous for her to travel. I have a story on fanfic.net,"Burden of Guilt" in which Arwen plays a large part as she is a character I like and see as a perfect match for Aragorn.