MithLuin · 10 February 2007 · Chapter 1: Conversational
Very cool! I can almost hear the eagles in the background, at the beginning.
Conversational by Vana Tuivana
Reviews (3)
daw the minstrel · 8 September 2005 · Chapter 1: Conversational
This was arresting. It was unexpected. The list of things that hand had done, the past it held for good and bad--it gave a sense of live and relationships focused on this small space.
Author's reply
Well, I like to surprise. Thank you for your comments! :D
perelleth · 8 September 2005 · Chapter 1: Conversational
How I like this vignette! It is almost as if i could see them. MAedhros is truly collected, recovered, almost cynical, and Fingon is his own self as I have com to picture him: blunt, loyal, caring, strong and valiant, no less in confronting the results of his deed than in doing it. It is sweet, despite the seting1
Good to read it here, too! :-)
Author's reply
I'm glad you see the characters so. I wanted to make Maedhros the more "intellectual", a bit jaded and weary, and Fingon perhaps a little less mature and the more restless or impulsive of the two -- but it's Fingon struggling to keep the memories alive, and Maedhros who seems to want to forget.
Thanks for the review, even more so because it's your second on this piece! :)