Reviews (36)

curiouswombat · 4 October 2014 · Chapter 2: Part 2

I always think it is a shame that people don't often leave reviews after the first few weeks of a story being posted. I had not read this before - I have actually come to it from the link at the MEFA Archive - and I just want to say how much I enjoyed it. I do love the idea of Pippin doing at least as much for the reign of the new king, in his own way, than any of the others. And the image of Boromir 'defiling' the fountain made me giggle, and will continue to do so for quite a while!

Mysterious Jedi · 23 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

I like your story. <>< Saved from sin through Christ, mj

Pearl Took · 17 October 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

This is wonderful, I'm all teary. I quite obviously haven't read enough of your stories. I loved all the descriptions of Pippin's Elvish. I loved his handling of and enjoyment with the lads of Gondor. I loved his desire to give the children places to play. Simply and thoroughly wonderful!!

storyfish · 28 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

Wonderful story, GW! I didn't plan on reading the entire thing before class this morning, but your story just hooked me in. The whole story arc is just so satisfying--everybody thinks Pip's just messing up again, but in reality he's showing just how thoughtful he is--and what a great Thain he'll be someday. :-) Thanks so much!

Anso the Hobbit · 22 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

*applauds* What a wonderful story! :D

Anso the Hobbit · 22 September 2005 · Chapter 1: Part 1

Lovely! I love all the little details in this. I am a bit amused though, of Pippin being so carefree to play with the children. One should think he would stop at talking with them. Lovely conversation between Frodo and Merry, too. :D

Dreamflower · 19 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

*heaves a great sigh of happiness* What a wonderful and satisfying story, GW. It is, of course, filled with humor--I don't think anything you write would be totally devoid of humor--but it is a serious and loving look at the rebuilding of a City, and how there are many different ways to contribute to such a task. I adore Pippin in this. He's still so completely Pippish, falling into trouble without ever trying, and yet still grown-up enough to take responsibility for his actions, and mature enough to see what truly needs doing. Thanks so much for sharing this lovely, lovely, lovely story! I truly do think it's one of your best ever.

Dreamflower · 19 September 2005 · Chapter 1: Part 1

Oh, GW, this has *got* to be one of your very best stories yet! It's not fair that I didn't get to see it when you first posted it!! There's so much to adore about this: Merry's and Sam's annoyance at Pippin's "desertion", Pip's quick sympathy for the children, and his stout defense of his King! I love his interaction with the various shopkeepers and with Ty, who surely reminds him of himself. I adore the little asides with Aragorn and Faramir, as they discuss the very problem that Pip is already addressing. And the part with Frodo and Merry discussing Pippin was a perfect gem. I most especially loved this part: You taught Pippin how to look out for himself, Merry, now let him do it,” Frodo said. “I may have taught him to look out for himself but I am having trouble teaching myself to allow him to do that,” Merry said. “How do you let go?” “I am still trying to let go of you, Merry-lad,” Frodo laughed. “You best ask someone wiser than myself for that knowledge. Merry said, “I know of no one wiser than you, Cousin.” And then the fountain episode. *chortle* Now *that's* going to be a conundrum for Aragorn indeed. I look forward to his expression when Pippin is brought before him. Now on to the next chapter...

rabidsamfan · 19 September 2005 · Chapter 1: Part 1

Well, this was a delight. I loved it that you included Bergil, and loved it even more that Pippin's hard "work" did such good for Aragorn. Although I suspect that the boys will still require a good wall to play their game against, even if they get grass and trees!

GamgeeFest · 18 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

LOL, only Pippin could get into trouble for wading in a fountain. That's a good idea Pippin had about finding somewhere for the children to play though. Gondor never did seem very kid-friendly to me with all that stone. I loved everyone's reactions when Pippin was hauled into the dining room, and Faramir and Aragorn trying to have a serious conversation about what Pippin's punishment should be. It's also very fitting that Pippin would be more afraid of his cousins than Strider. And the Elvish singing - LOL! Poor Legolas and Frodo, having to endure that trauma. :) Ty was a cute kid and Pippin can finally put his knowledge of being the youngest to good use.

SlightlyTookish · 17 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

The End?? But there must be a sequel! I want to know about Pippin's "official appointment" with Aragorn! This is one of your best stories, GW. I love how you show Aragorn settling into his duties as king and winning over his people, and Faramir advising him. The memory of Boromir gave me a giggle, and I love the bantering between the hobbits and just everything about Pippin :D

Bodkin · 15 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

So there you go! Pippin the wanderer proves to be the one whose ease of manner and ability to get on with allcomers can encourage the people of the White City to open their minds to the king. Pippin and the boys scrubbing the fountain is actually a clever high-profile way of showing everyone that the king tempers justice with mercy and understanding - and the story about Boromir is just a massive plus. Although I imagine that a hung-over seventeen-year-old accepted his punishment rather more grumpily and with rather less grace. And then there's the singing! Pippish, indeed! And Legolas's pained expression when he congratulates himself on the graciousness of his response to mangled Elvish. And Haldir teaching the songs in order to penalise Legolas for the dwarf's presence. And Gimli's indignation and the hint of revenge in his eyes. This is just one delightful incident piled on another until the whole concoction is so rich! The formal appointment with the King - at the same time and place as the informal meeting with Strider - will certainly result in some allocated play areas for children. Which is probably a good thing - as long as they are chosen for something other than being out of the way and not wanted by anyone else. Splendid end to a splendid story. So pleased to read it.

Baggins Babe · 15 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

I really loved this story - so hobbity of Pip to go off with the children, and how sweet of him to think of them not having anywhere to play. Wonderful, too, that he managed to remind everyone of the Shire and why they had gone on the Quest in the first place. Boromir's 'defilement' of the fountain made me roll about. That wouldn't have been inspired by a well-known tale about a fountain in Wellington, NZ, and two very naughty hobbits, would it?! :-))

lindahoyland · 14 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

This was just delightful,thank you for a most enjoyable read.I should love a sequel.I did think that Pippin's 'defiling' of the fountain" was not the worst that could be done to it,as Boromir proved !

PIppinfan1988 · 14 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

I tend to agree! There's no place like the Shire...as I turn a pirhouette in my ruby slippers... I LOVED, LOVED, LOVED this most exquisite tale! If I weren't at work, I would have shouted and did a jig on top of my desk when I read that portion of Pippin learing Gondorian law!!! Inside, I was all giddy with joy! But bless his wee, little hobbity heart. I think you bundled everybody's idea of Pippin Took in this lovely story. He's caring, innocent, *knows* how to have fun (i.e., mischievous), courageous, clever, and the sweetest hobbit...okay, ONE of the sweetest hobbits JRRT invented. :-) Thank you so much for an amazing, well-thought out story. I enjoyed every line of it. Thanks again and take your bow. *more applause* Pippinfan p.s. Part II was about 15 pages...but still well worth it. :-)

Daynawayna · 14 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

Wow, Grey Wonderer! That was an AMAZING story! I love how you got the plot bunnies to work together and.... wow. I love kids and Pip, so I knew this would be a goodie. You got everyone right. I liked Aragorn being uneasy about meeting with 'his people' and I loved how Pippin set them straight about him. And precious Ty! How adorable! Pip'll make a great dad someday. Lovely job. :)

Tigger · 14 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

I thank you for the painful experience of snorting Apple Cinnamon Tea up my nose when I read about Boromir's defiling of The King's Fountain. Oh *my*....I could just hear Sean Bean's, "Gondor has no King." as I read that, I'd just taken a sip of tea before reading that and next thing I knew...Cinnamon in the sinuses *hurts*, but I'm also grateful to you too. My Fall Sinus battle has begun, so at least they're clear. For now. :oD What a wonderful second chapter and there they all were. Ready to dress Pippin down for disappearing and Aragorn found out after all in the end his youngest Knight *was* up to good after all. I was glad to see the other hobbits, especially Merry, realize it too. I loved the "Pippish" comment. Have to remember that one. :oD Wonderful story and I hope we get a sequel. I mean, you've got to tell us how Aragorn finds a place for the children to play after all!! Thanks for the great read!! :o)

Mum's the Word · 14 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

Hurray! You've shown well how good can come of a bad situation, and how even the smallest can be of help. Excellent community-service assignment, glad the other boys came to help. Loved the singing. Great job, Grey Wonderer! Blessings, Mum's the Word

Sarah Barr · 14 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

A charming little story. Well done! Love and hugs, Sarah xxx

Hai Took · 14 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

What a splendid story! I loved the way you showed Pippin so mature yet he was still a child as well, ready and willing to play. I certainly got Merry upset with not telling where he was going and when but he did good things as well as find a bit of trouble. I'm glad so many people listened to what he said about Aragorn and wanted to see why Pippin respected the King so much. I especially liked the end with Pippin remindeing Frodo what it was all for. I did want a bit more and to find out how Pippin approached Aragorn about the place for the children and what they do to resolve it. It was a lot of fun and I loved the children you wrote along with Bergil! I know you have another story out recently but I hardly have time to get on anymore so I have to get it in snatches! Thank you for the fun in this story!

shirebound · 14 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

What a lovely story. The entire city (and its king) benefitted from Pippin's presence in Minas Tirith. “I should like to hear Pippin sing in Elvish,” Faramir said, smiling. “I have heard it,” Frodo sighed. “And it is not exactly Elvish. It is more like Pippish.” *grins* I'd love to hear it, too!

Andrea · 14 September 2005 · Chapter 2: Part 2

“Haldir told me that he would get even with me for bringing a Dwarf into the Golden Wood, but I had not expected such cruelty.” LOL! I'd like to hear Elvish with Took accent :) So, after all Pippin's little "adventure" served the King a lot! I loved it that the boys of Minas Tirith helped Pippin to clean the fountain. Even Merry cannot deny, that what Pippin did, turned out to be good in the end. But I think, it will take him a long time yet to let his little cousin really go.

PIppinfan1988 · 13 September 2005 · Chapter 1: Part 1

Absolutely fantastic!!! *applause* This is very exciting--I really like it when the hobbits mingle with children. Everything is brilliant...extremely plausible, transitions from scene to scene are handled very smoothly. LOL, maybe I should get somebody to beta my stories! Sadly, I'm too impatient. I hope you're not going to make us wait too long for Part II! I hope it's 19 + pages! Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. :-) Pippinfan

Elentariel · 13 September 2005 · Chapter 1: Part 1

Uh oh! Will Aragorn be roaring with laughter, roaring at his guards or inwardly roaring at such a stupid rule? I mean, there isn't even a sign!

Tigger · 12 September 2005 · Chapter 1: Part 1

Wow...What a contrast in this tale. There's Merry and Sam wanting to kill Pip for shirking his responsiblities, when Pip is doing just the opposite. There's Faramir and Aragorn talking about how they need to do something to help the people of Gondor realize Aragorn is a much different person than Denethor and worthy of the crown, and there's Pip doing that very thing by telling the various people about Aragorn and all he did during the Quest. I have a feeling Elessar will be displeased w/his youngest Knight, but once he finds out the entire story, Aragorn's mind might just change. :o) Looking forward to more of this wonderful story.