Set Backs and Bonds Forged by Coriandra
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Periantari
· 31 January 2007
· Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I love this story so much--i frequently revisit it for the Sam h/c that seems to be scarce these days. I really like this Fellowship story overall because there are so many different scenes of mutual comfort during an angsty situation. I really liked the Sam and Gimli dialogue here and especially love the fact that Frodo heard what they were saying and smiled.
Your Sam h/c is awesome though-- and i love the action in trying to get him to feel better. And poor Aragorn with his guilt!
Author's reply
Thank you very much. It's good to know that the story's still being read and enjoyed. I really enjoyed writing this chapter. It was challenging,butrewarding at the same time. And of course, poor Aragorn felt terrible about his mistake. That part was fun to write.:). It's a good thing he got over his guilt at the end of the story. Thanks again for your feedback. I'm glad you like the story.
Mysterious Jedi
· 31 January 2004
· Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Hello! Just thought you looked like you needed a review for such an excellent story!
Author's reply
Thank you, it's good to know you enjoyed it.
Lady Jaina
· 30 September 2003
· Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I loved the fact that Gimli has been given a major role in this chapter! You always do such a good job!
Author's reply
Thank you very much. I found writing this part quite a challenge, but I enjoyed it. I'm glad you did too.
Shireling
· 30 September 2003
· Chapter 8: Chapter 8
You have captured Sam's character so well in this chapter. I could almost feel him twitching to be up. Nice take on Gimli too.
Helen
Author's reply
Yes, it's becoming pretty difficult for Sam, isn't it? The poor Hobbit needed some support. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you're still enjoying the story.
Lady Jaina
· 24 September 2003
· Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Very good job, as always! Keep up the great work!
Author's reply
Thank you. The next chapter should be up early next week.
carolynkelsea
· 22 September 2003
· Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Poor Aragorn - I'm glad the others all forgave him, he's beating himself up enough as it is... Silly Pippin needs to stop blaming everybody around him LOL!
Author's reply
Yes, Pippin definately needs some correcting, doesn't he? So does Aragorn for condemning himself for this mistake.
Thanks for your feedback; it was much appreciated, as always.
carolynkelsea
· 22 September 2003
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Yay, Boromir is back! I love the scene with him and the hobbits :)
Author's reply
Glad you liked it, that was one of my favourite scenes too.
carolynkelsea
· 22 September 2003
· Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Hey this is great - I know you wrote a disclaimer against it but I'm printing this out in case I'm ever stuck in a cave with a sick hobbit :)
Author's reply
*laughs* Not much chance of that, I don't think, but thank you anyway. I love your feedback.
carolynkelsea
· 22 September 2003
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
LOL at Aragorn swearing in Elvish! Hmm what is Pippin upset about?...
Author's reply
Pippin is acting a bit strangely, isn't he? This is a stressful time for all of them, but some are handling it better than others. Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you're still enjoying this.
carolynkelsea
· 22 September 2003
· Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Oh no - poor Sam! I liked your descriptions of all the herbal remedies (I wonder what's in those 2 bottles though???)
Author's reply
Poor Sam's having some problems isn't he? I'm glad you liked my descriptions of all the remedies, that makes writing them very rewarding. And do you know what? You're the first reader who seemed to notice the part about the two bottles.
carolynkelsea
· 22 September 2003
· Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I love Boromir in this chapter! On to the next... This is fun :)
Author's reply
Thank you, I glad you enjoyed it.
Lady Jaina
· 17 September 2003
· Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Please update soon! Why does Aragorn blame himself? I suppose I will learn soon enough! Great, great job! I am really enjoying this!
Author's reply
Hi Lady Jaina, I hope this chapter answers your question. Thank you very much for your feedback. I always find it encouraging and the updates come faster that way.
Mysterious Jedi
· 7 September 2003
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Very good, please continue.
Author's reply
Thanks for you review. Chapter 5 will be up early this week.
JULES6
· 7 September 2003
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Hi,
Really enjoying this story - very well written - hope to see more soon. Very descriptive and imaginative. Keep going. Your doing great. Oh what the hell - I never was good at writing a review.
JULES
Author's reply
Thank you very much, I think you wrote a great review. The next chapter will up soon.
Lady Jaina
· 2 September 2003
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Oh, I loved this! Do you post on ff.net? I don't know if they will tell me you updated here (I'm kinda new on here) Great work, I really enjoyed! It's not often Sam gets sick on Caradharas, but it was original, and I appreciate that!
Author's reply
Hi, thank you very much for your feedback. Yes, the story is posted at ff.net. I usually post my updates there first, but not always. Thanks again, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Lindelea
· 19 August 2003
· Chapter 2: Chapter 2
A promising beginning, well-written h/c indeed. I do not know when last I saw Sam-angst...
Have you looked at your story, in preview mode or as the reader sees it? The control codes are rather annoying, and distract from an otherwise fine read.
Author Reply: Thank you very much. I love feedback and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. As for the control codes, I believe they've been corrected.