Reviews (6)

Antane · 30 April 2009 · Chapter 2

An intriguing, though rather frightening story. I look forward to more with the hope Frodo and Bilbo will recover. *looks at Frodo fearfully, wishing I could hug him* Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Larner · 29 April 2009 · Chapter 2

I see that the font demon has gotten to you, too, cutting your italicized material apart and displacing it. Did that to me, too. Since I started saving my writing in .rtf format and posting from that I've not been troubled with this problem, but it drove me crazy for a while!\ Poor Frodo--he is experiencing the worst; and is his presence somehow stopping them from crossing onto the Straight Road to the Undying Lands?

Larner · 29 April 2009 · Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Frodo. Nice movie-verse rendition.

shirebound · 29 April 2009 · Chapter 2

I'm glad this isn't the end, Teresa! I look forward to chapter 3.

shirebound · 2 October 2005 · Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A most intriguing beginning! I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 2.

harrowcat · 2 October 2005 · Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I wasn't sure I wanted to read this Girlofring from your description but I am glad I did. A good fleshing out of this scene and am looking forward to chapter 2