Larner · 14 October 2005 · Chapter 1: Waiting
Indeed, a moment of great grief for the father, and the one word which can release the floods.
Author's reply
Thanks for reviewing :) Yes, word can be a powerful thing :)
Waiting by Estelle
Reviews (3)
Brazgirl · 12 October 2005 · Chapter 1: Waiting
Very touching. I like.
Author's reply
Thanks for reviewing :D I'm glad you like it!
Karri · 12 October 2005 · Chapter 1: Waiting
*claps* Woot! You did it, and quite a touching double drabble it is, too! Very nice. :-) Suggestion, though, if you do not mind... I think the whole thing would be a touch better in present tense.
Author's reply
Thank you :) Yeah, I have initially written it in present tense but it looked kinda weird so I changed it to past tense. Then I changed back to present and but finally settled on past. LOL!! Perhaps I should change it back to present tense. Hahaha! Will let you beta the other version :)