Reviews (7)

Shield-maiden of Rohan · 11 April 2025 · Chapter 21: At Length

Wow. Good read. But please… WHAT HAPPENS TO OLIHRE? Also I would wish to see some interactions later between Xanthe and Lothiriel over the love of healing, and/or Éomer. Perhaps your Lothíriel is not a Healer?

Orangeblossom Took · 4 September 2003 · Chapter 21: At Length

Very interesting and well-written story. There aren't enough stories about Eomer. Your dialogue and discriptions were great.

daw the minstrel · 20 August 2003 · Chapter 21: At Length

That was a good read. Fun, with touching moments. Good detail and dialogue. I liked it!

daw the minstrel · 20 August 2003 · Chapter 13: Cold Water, Warm Heart

Well that was romantic. Eomer likes to live dangerously, I'll say that for him.

daw the minstrel · 20 August 2003 · Chapter 9: Bold Is Beautiful

All of these characters -- OC and canon -- are coming alive nicely. The dialogue is very well done. PS I love the dress. I want one like it.

daw the minstrel · 20 August 2003 · Chapter 5: Heavy Burdens

Xanthe is an intriguing character. I think it's hard to create good female characters in Tolkien's world, but you have done so in her. The description of the effect of her illness was heartrending. I can imagine what it must have done to a shy child to be isolated like that.

daw the minstrel · 20 August 2003 · Chapter 1: Eomer Tempts Fate

This was a great chapter! I love Eomer and this is such a skillful introduction of him and the boy and his sister. You show us so much without having to tell us. And then there is that nice last line, suggestion Eomer's loneliness.