Lianna · 24 November 2005 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
I'll be following this one closely. I enjoy prickly characters, like both your warrior and your healer. He really needed that bath, though. ;) If not for your introductory paragraph, I would never have guessed that English is not your native language. I'm an editor by profession, and I often work with material written by people for whom English is a second language. Usually, the fact that they are not native speakers is very obvious. But not with you.
Author's reply
Thank you for your praise for my English but I must admit I had help from a native speaker. And yes, that man was definitely in need of a bath. It never overcame me when I read the books, but watching the movies I always felt the urge to put him in a big tub with hot water.