Reviews (4)

Frodo Baggins · 7 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Inhabited

Hey, Clever Hobbit! That was a very interesting story. I've never thought of it like that. It's sad that the Hobbits left. But, it seems right that the memories of Frodo, and Sam and Merry and Pippin should live on in Bag End. Cool story idea. "Any Ranger is welcome. Thank you, my friend." That was really neat. Just like Frodo...it was supposed to be Frodo, right? Namarie, mell min! God Bless, Frodo Baggins

Larner · 6 December 2005 · Chapter 1: Haunted

Nice to read this here. Loved it on the other site.

Baggins Babe · 5 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Inhabited

This was such a bittersweet story, and how sad that the hobbits have to leave their beloved Shire. Sweet to know that the joys and sorrows have endured in Bag End, as I'm sure they do in many places. This was perfect: Sometimes, when he was attempting to stand and test his leg, little hands would reach up and steady him. Occasionally, when he was eating, even tinier hands would tug at his sleeves until he “accidentally” dropped a sizeable piece of his meal. I love the idea of little hobbits helping the young Ranger, and cadging food! :-)) Lovely!

Anonymous · 5 December 2005 · Chapter 2: Inhabited

wonderful. i love this new perspective. it was bittersweet, coming upon bag end with young edwin (who i love, by the way, as well as holly) and seeing the empty place it's become. well, it was bittersweet until the 2nd chapter, which made me all warm inside. i like holly's view of it, with happiness being left behind as well as sadness. keep writing, ming