Reviews (255)

rabidsamfan · 7 January 2006 · Chapter 2: Resolve

Yay! Sam comfort! Frodo hasn't really thought about what returning to the tower is going to do to Sam, has he? But you have! Yay for bringing the whole Fellowship along! *waits for chapter three*

SurgicalSteel · 7 January 2006 · Chapter 2: Resolve

Oh, this was lovely - I really enjoyed the interaction between Sam and Aragorn. It's pretty clear that poor Sam has some healing to do as well. You manage to paint a wonderful picture of Alcaren as well, although we don't see much of him. And lovely Frodo, more worried about the King's dignity and position than the King is. It'll be lovely to see the Fellowship actually making it to Mordor as a Fellowship.

Lily · 7 January 2006 · Chapter 2: Resolve

It's a relief to see that all his friends are willing to accompany Frodo. I'm looking forward to what will happen, though I must admit - if Frodo isn't frightened of his journey, I am all the more.

harrowcat · 7 January 2006 · Chapter 2: Resolve

Hm, paperwork or Frodo! No contest really is there Aragorn? Especially not with Faramir as your Steward and a useful little ball to keep an eye on things. Or even one that used to be in a certain other tower soon to be visited!!?! Now work, work and more work or new chapter of a great story by Shirebound? Well really! Fancy imagining there is truly a contest there either. *grins slyly and goes to shut door quickly!*

Lotrgirl1415 · 4 January 2006 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

May I just say that....I love you...lol I have been waiting for a story like this for sooo long, and I KNOW you will pull it off consummately. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Pearl Took · 4 January 2006 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Dark are the things that still tug at our hobbit's minds. Evil reduced but not totally gone. This is off to a most intriguing start.

Cathleen · 4 January 2006 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Shirebound, this is a wonderful beginning to what I'm certain is going to be a truly engrossing and suspenseful tale! I'm very much anticipating the next part. Cathleen

Claudia · 2 January 2006 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

(too lazy to log in, lol) Anyway, I love how this started. I adore the premise of this, that Frodo would need to return to the original tower to remember what he went through. I sense some angst ahead! But of course loved the hobbity banter with the guard, too! ;-D

Grey Wonderer · 31 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Oh, I do like this beginning. I am anxious to see what comes next. It felt right that Pippin would sense the Palantir being so close to it and Frodo's reaction to the room was riviting. Looking forward to more of this one.

Baggins Babe · 31 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

I was thrilled to see another Shirebound story, and this is a fascinating idea. I can understand why Frodo might want to go back to Cirith Ungol, but I can also understand why Sam is concerned. Great start, and Alcaren is already turning out to be an interesting character. Looking forward to more.

Telpethoron · 30 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

You definitely have me intrigued by this one. I can understand why Frodo feels he has to return to Cirith Ungol - but I fear what will happen to him when he does. Confronting one's inner demons is no easy task, even when you have friends like Sam to help you. I'm going to buckle in and enjoy the ride - hope to see more of this posted soon!

Siorah · 30 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

I was so excited to see another story by Shirebound, I did a Happy Dance around the room! I cannot wait for the next installment. I hope your Holidays were grand! Cheers! Kathleen

jodancingtree · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Oh, this already has me shivering - and I always love your take on Frodo, steadfast and questing, even at his most vulnerable. Eagerly looking forward to more! jo

aprilkat · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Oh, this is a most intriguing premise and development! Frodo needing to face his demons to remember something so traumatic, Sam trying to protect him - and Pippin having his own little flashes of memory and precognition. I can't wait to see what happens on this journey.

Ainu Laire · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Scene: Minas Tirith, fifth level. Laire is currently in a clean, reputable pub, in the corner with her laptop. Beside her, smoking a pipe and in his dark 'ranger cloak', is Aragorn, completely unrecognized. She is grinning like a maniac, and he looks completely amused. I read this, prepared to scream "Aragorn" like a fanatic nut... but I'm screaming another name... Alcaren! I feel in love with him right away! I love him! I want to take him home! Aragorn: Thank Elbereth, it was about time it wasn't me. Oh, you're not out of my mind either, ranger. Anyways, there are just some OCs that one cannot help but love. This is one of them. I want him! XD He's so... awesome! I don't know why, but I loved him right away! Oh, I love how you write the hobbits, Janet. It just brings a big grin to my face when I see all four of them together. The beginning really got to me. I love it much! Oh, I never thought that the tower of Ecthelion being similar to the guard tower in Minas Morgul, but now that you mention it, it really makes perfect sense. It's a common occurance in real life- Aragorn: You mean your world? ... fine, *my world* *rolls eyes*. But it makes a lot of sense. You are so smart ^^ Saw movie!Pippin reference right there, with the beacon *grins and is proud of self* *happily ignores Aragorn's snickering* Speaking of Pippin, he is still drawn to the Palantir, it seems... *sigh* That may be a bit of a problem. The lack of Aragorn, funny enough, doesn't have me sad at all- Aragorn: *sighs with relief* She's terrible when miserable. -and I am the first official member of the Alcaren fan club. Aragorn: *starts coughing, yet cannot hold back laughter* Oh, shush, ranger, or I'll tell the whole pub here who you are. Aragorn: *narrows eyes* ... just kidding *gives him a big grin* Oh, this was a fabulous pre-b-day gift! *grins* I loved it a lot. I cannot wait until you continue, madam! ^^ *bows and exits to do holiday homework*

harrowcat · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Ooh! I've heard that returning to the scene of the crime is supposed to be good for the victim but I'm with Sam on this! Frodo you mustn't!!!!! But he will anyway! You evil Author, you. And your readers are there egging you on at every turn. *g*

Garnet Took · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Great beginning. I'm looking forward to where you're taking this. I thought it was really interesting that Frodo knew so much about the layout of the tower even though his memories of the time he was held at Cirith Ungel were so vague. I'm also fascinated that Pippin was subconsciously aware of the palanir and where it was. I'm worried about what's going to happen to him. Thanks. GT

Lindelea · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Hoorah! This posting is much sooner than I'd anticipated. Perfect diversion on a "sick day". “I suspect that is so," Alcaren said, his eyes darkening. "As you may know, Minas Tirith and Minas Morgul were once sister cities, built in spirals climbing ever skyward; with a tower atop both. The guard post of which you speak was also built by the Men of Gondor, as a watchtower on the edge of the Black Lands. It would be logical to assume that it is, in appearance, of like fashion to the other towers – with its most secure rooms at the top; however, I do not know of anyone now living who has reported back as to its true nature." I never thought of this, but it makes sense! Pippin nodded to himself, but said nothing. He was the only hobbit who had seen Denethor’s palantír, and heard the rumors of where it had been kept. He wondered if the King now kept, in the same upper chamber, the Seeing Stone that Gandalf had given him near Isengard. Pippin wondered what it would be like to hold the Stone once again, now that someone like Strider controlled it, and not Saruman. To look into its depths again... With an effort, he shook off the unbidden thought. Ooo, Pip-angst and possibilities. Wonder if you'll be taking this idea any further? Or is it just a side trail, momentarily to divert the reader? “I do not believe this room has been used in many a year,” Faramir said, looking around and motioning for the hobbits to enter. “No one was held here long, it was rather for...” He quickly came to Frodo’s side. “My friend, are you unwell?” Now you have stirred my curiosity. What was the room rather for? And if it hasn't been all that long since Frodo was out of bed, we might perhaps see Bergil, or Beregond (still awaiting his hearing before the King)? (Sorry, still obssessed with that plot point. Want RabidSamFan to continue her "Errand Lad" right to the point of joy at Beregond's reprieve... or beyond, would be nice.)

SlightlyTookish · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Ooh, what an exciting beginning!! You've started something so interesting here, exploring the link between Minas Tirith and Minas Morgul, and I can't wait to see where you take it. I *loved* seeing the hobbits spending some time with Faramir, and also their card game and Frodo "cheating" and Pippin being drawn once again to the palantir....eee! I hope you post the next part soon! :D

Dreamflower · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Oh dear! I can't think the other three are going to approve *at all* of what it seems that Frodo has in mind. And it seems Pippin is still somewhat drawn to the palantir. This is a very intriguing beginning, Shirebound, and I have to say I am *really* looking forward to more!

Cuthalion · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Oooohhh... and how I'm looking forward to the rest of this story! This is more than intrigueing, and it was certainly worth the time we spent waiting for your tale!

Amy · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Oh, v. interesting! Some hobbits are a bit catlike in their curiosity, I guess! *claps hands* I hadn't thought about the towers being alike, but it makes sense. Rather disconcerting after the eastern one had fallen to the enemy to think that its strengths and weaknesses would be clear to the other side.

Andrea · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Stubborn Baggins, does he really know what he's doing? No-one knows what really happened at Cirith Ungol, and sometimes it's better not to know everything! However, this time Frodo will be not alone. Particularly Sam will not leave his side and that's good! I'm curious to know what will happen next - and a little frightened, I must admit.

Linda Hoyland · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

What a lovely surprise to find a new story from you and this one promises to be really exciting and feature all my favourite characters !

Niphrandl · 29 December 2005 · Chapter 1: The Tower of the Sun

Ok. You have me hooked! I cannot believe that Frodo would want to go back there. It can not lead to any good as I see it. Just from his reaction to seeing the guardroom is enough for me to cheer Sam on in convincing Frodo not to go. But, knowing the stubborness of the Baggins', I know that Frodo will go whether Sam wants it or not. I will be waiting for the next chapter! Email me please? Niphy