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The whole story was just wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I do not think I have ever read a story of such quality and talent as this one. The emotional and exciting journey and adventure faced by all of your characters were takled and conveyed with such realism, it was as if I was watching a movie instead of reading a fanfic. In fact, to call this story fanfic is an insult, considering some of the drivel out there on the internet that call themselves fanfic. Your bounty hunter was totally inspired writing, totally original in character and action. Amazing. I felt every one of Legolas' injuries, again all totally believable. I get sick of reading fics that have Legolas undergo injury after injury with barely any after effect. he is usually treated as some kind of super being that can recover from being shot with arrows, tortured to the brink of death then starved and shot again......and he's fine the next day. Again, your interpretation was believeable in his injuries and recovery from them. You managed to do all this without making this a long boring dreary fic......the action was superb, the characters all believeable and real, and the little bits of humour uplifting. The very heart of this fic was the friendship and devotion between Aragorn and Legolas. At the risk of repeating myself, again it was believeable. It is a fine balance to get right without making them seem slashy in their love for each other. you balanced them perfectly. Sorry for the really long review but I like to save it all for the end. This is going in my favourites, and I will probably read this many times over for ever. I bow to you. Rona

How very beautifully written!

That was absolutely beautiful! You have a real talent for writing! I hope you plan to continue to write, it brings pleasure to many; myself included! Galimeril ;D

That's beautiful, you really have a way of capturing the feel of the moment. I can't wait to see what happens next, till then I am faithfully yours! PS I really can't wait, you're killing me here! ;D

I'm dying to hear how it ends!!! I cna't take the suspense!!! I'm lovin it so far!!! keep it up!! :-D

AHHH! You've done it agian! Another cliffie, I can't take it! You can't kill legolas, you just CAN'T!!! I love my poor legolas!!!!! Please update soon!!

Oh the irony! I like this story! A lot!!! I can 't wait to hear the next update! You are a very talented writer!

Unfortunately, no matter how well polished a story is, how well planned and executed or even how beautifully written it is, if the author uses the word "snuck" it sticks out like a burr in a silk dress. Proper English states that the verb To Sneak is a regular verb. It does not change vowel sounds. Thus: sneak, sneaked, has/have sneaked. and sneaking. It matters not how many people who know proper English think it is "cute" or "fashionable" to use "snuck" and thus join the crowd of those who use "snuck" because they don't know any better, thus fulfilling the prophecy "everyone uses it". I've even seen it in a poster on a fourth grade class wall, where George Washington "snuck" across the river. There is one modern dictionary that has succumbed to the "popular" mentality of including it as an acceptable substitute for sneaked. (Shame on them!) BUT---as always, "snuck" is in the vocabulary of the dialect found in southern Missouri (Ozarks) or the hill country of Appalachia. It is associated with words like drownded, ain't got no ___, hissn, them thar hills, I seen it, etc. Please...for the love of literature...use "sneaked". I swear, NO ONE will ever notice or complain. Thank you!

Hi, Nettie! Welcome to Stories of Arda.

I like your story. I hope Aragorn figures out what to do soon. I wonder how Gimli will react when he finds out about the situation!

i so looovvveee this story, you are a great writer, just hope legolas can get away eventually (i love angst) please update soon,thanks, love and hugs "a" x

i am really enjoying this story, wonderfully written, update soon, thanks x

fantastic,keep it comming, well done xxx