docmon · 12 March 2006 · Chapter 1: Sarn Gebir
great job of creating intense action in few words. I certainly felt the anxiety that the characters were no doubt feeling. Great touch at the end, to bring us back to the story, and remind us where Borormir is at the moment. Well done!
Author's reply
Thank you so much, docmon, for reviewing this - and especially for the glowing words about the writing style. I have received mixed reviews about this and doubted myself. Thanks again!!! Agape