Burning by Salsify

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Agape4Gondor · 22 April 2007 · Chapter 1

I was a little surprised that Denethor sounded so 'sane' - but I very much liked what you did with him... I agree totally with your assessment, if I read this right, of why Denethor chose this path for himself and his youngest. Very good writing!

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Thanks! His plans probably seemed perfectly rational and appropriate to him, though everyone who had to deal with him was more than likely scared out of their wits.

Sphinx · 24 August 2003 · Chapter 1

Very well written. You dont fall into the tarp of making denethor sound like a madman like most authors do, and this made the piece so much more effective. I particularly liked the part where you describe the marks of the scholar fading and the marks of a warrior replacing them. Good work!