Black Eyes by Lialathuveril
Macphisto's girl · 12 June 2006 · Chapter 5: Parley
What can I said about the last chapters? I simply adore this two... They are good opponents, very persistent, by the way. And it enchants to me how Lothiriel tries to cover her feelings, that little by little are awaking.
Author's reply
Hello Celeste, yes, they are quite alike. Both rather stuborn, possessed of a sudden temper and both with hidden agendas. But Lothiriel is fighting a loosing battle I think! Saludos Lia
vampfan30 · 12 June 2006 · Chapter 5: Parley
what can I say, another good chapter...... I think things may be getting better for Eomer, considering she hasn't blacked the other eye!
Author's reply
Hi Vampfan, I agree things are looking up for Eomer - the first chapter where he didn't get his feet stepped on, wasn't lied to and didn't get hit. Definitely an improvement! Lia
Bodkin · 9 June 2006 · Chapter 4: Pitched battle
Well - I'm not surprised Lothiriel can't swim. Aunt Ivriniel wouldn't have thought it at all proper. Taking your clothes off? Outside? No, can't have princesses doing that. Good thing they've had a bit of mutual life-saving. Although I hope Lothiriel wasn't thinking of using the black eye in quite the way I thought she might. That would be very sneaky - and an outright lie. Eomer's disgust - and anger - were quite understandable really. But what might make an impression on her is the realisation that her campaign has actually made her stand out and be far more noticeable. Although not as noticeable as scaling a cliff, dragging the King of Rohan to safety and then doing her best to drown. A few more hours on the island? That could be interesting. Looking forward to seeing how the scheme develops.
Author's reply
Hello Bodkin, as I see it, Lothiriel thought that she would not have to say anything at all, just let people draw the logical conclusions. We might actually get to see Imrahil's reaction later on, it might be fun. Like you pointed out, she has made herself pretty noticeable, but she did get the right results in the end. The question is whether being noticeable or not would have mattered anyway - more on that in the next chapter. Oh, and I think Aunt Ivriniel disapproves of taking one's clothes off anywhere... Lia
vampfan30 · 8 June 2006 · Chapter 4: Pitched battle
To answer the question about me giving a black eye --during the dating period, no. Now that we are married ,I can definitely consider it on occasion! ^__^
Alison H · 7 June 2006 · Chapter 4: Pitched battle
So *that's* where the title comes from! Lothiriel gave Eomer a black eye and at least she felt guilty about it later.That's something at least. It's good that they're talking to each other civily now and even sharing a laugh.I don't think Lothiriel has given up the fight yet but all her planning seems to have backfired.The hours ahead should be very interesting. Yay, Anca survived.Good doggy! Update soon. Ali.
Author's reply
Hello Ali, see, I told you the dog was going to be okay. I was kinder to Anca than I was to Eomer - I wonder what that says about myself? Lothiriel's planning hasn't quite worked out as she thought, yet the result is what she wanted, isn't it. In the next chapter we'll get a bit more of Eomer's motivation. More next week! Lia
vampfan30 · 7 June 2006 · Chapter 4: Pitched battle
hey! this character kinda reminds me of me. I did some of the same things dating-- tried to throw off certain people ( uhm, didn't work - married the guy 8 years ago yesterday) So, I can see where this could go .....^__^
Author's reply
Hello Vampfan, sounds like a bit of a trial by fire to me! Nothing like a black eye to liven up a relationship I suppose - did you try that one too?
Bodkin · 6 June 2006 · Chapter 3: Suspension of hostilities
It would be a very stupid way to die ... but I somehow don't think she will just yet! Very brave of her to rescue the King of Rohan - who really should have been warned about the dangers of riding on the beach. And they're about to be stuck on a small island together until the tide goes down? With her all wet and in clingy clothes? And him able to show his manly strength and versatility. (Not like that!!) Lighting driftwood fires and providing dry shirts, while showing off admirable pecs. And a good six-pack. Could be interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's reply
Hello Bodkin, don't give too much away! As I said before, they need a place for a cosy tête-a-tête and it looks like they finally got it. I don't know about driftwood fires (it is rather a small island), but you might get lucky with the pecs... More soon! Lia
Celeste · 3 June 2006 · Chapter 3: Suspension of hostilities
Lothiriel, dear princess, when are you going to learn? Always in trouble. Right now, I'm so intrigued (so, well done!)... I'm sure that I have to wait a week for the next part! C
Author's reply
Hello Celeste, She's never going to learn - not as long as she's in my clutches ;-) You know me well, it's going to be another week, but I promise to update faithfully! Saludos Lia
Anonymous · 2 June 2006 · Chapter 3: Suspension of hostilities
I love your story, and I really hope that Lothiriel will tell Eomer the truth once they reach the island. Great job!
Author's reply
They will be stuck on that island for a while, so the truth might well come out eventually...
Alison H · 2 June 2006 · Chapter 3: Suspension of hostilities
Ah, a cliffy!! Going down to the beach was *not* a good idea, for both of them and now lives are in danger.Poor Anca,I hope he swam to safety! No wonder Eomer didn't recognise Lothiriel in her 'normal' clothes and he was positively ice-cold towards her when he realised who she was.I didn't blame him in the slightest for his reaction, but at least Lothiriel realised that her behaviour had been abominable. Now, a warrior King and a troubled Princess stuck on a small island as they're surrounded by the raging sea may just be the perfect oppurtunity for the truth to come out.Eomer will want to know why Lothiriel lied to him and Eomer can show her his caring side.I can't wait to read more! Just don't let them be rescued too soon.I want angst! Update soon. Ali.
Author's reply
Hello Ali, Don't worry about the dog, she's an excellent swimmer. Also don't worry about them being rescued too quickly - it would be no fun! I couldn't resist the idea of those two being stranded on a lonely island completely on their own, especially now that Eomer knows she's been lying to him. On the other hand he now owes her his life. Things might well get interesting in the next chapter. More next week! Lia
Alatriel · 31 May 2006 · Chapter 2: First passage at arms
The aunt reminds me so much of Mark Darcy's aunt in Pride and Prejudice!! What an absolute horror. You are portraying her very well Lia. I guess it's fortunate that Eomer is a mighty warrior. Can you imagine the pool of mush on the floor that any ordinary man would have been reduced to after just one or two scathing remarks from the old cow!!!!!!! I imagine the revenge coming Lothiriels way from Eomer after the remark about having an open marriage. Am actually rubbing my hands with glee hoping that you might touch on that later. What a hoot!!! Yet again we all hold our breath in anticipation of the next chapter, and the next, and the next................ Don't keep us waiting too long Lia, we are hungry for more!! Alatriel.
Author's reply
Hello Alatriel, I saw the latest adaption of Pride and Prejudice with (I think) Judy Dench, and that's indeed just the kind of woman I have in mind. The sort who'd terrorize her whole family if you let her! That last remark of Lothiriel's was rather ill-timed, wasn't it. I'm sure Eomer won't just let it drop. You won't have to wait too long now, the next chapter is planned for Friday. I have to warn you though, this is only going to be a short story, 7 chapters and an epilogue to be precise. Thanks for leaving me a review! Lia
Bodkin · 29 May 2006 · Chapter 2: First passage at arms
Oh dear! That was a dirty blow - and I reckon Lothiriel will feel rather begrimed by it. But you can't win a war without casualties. Now - the foot-crushing and the lack of conversation - and the prevarication about horses - well, that's one thing. Could even be considered a way of getting to know Eomer, but the 'arrangements'... that's going a bit far! Aunt Ivriniel is a bit of a dragon. One with poor taste in clothes and personal adornment. But Lothiriel has been shown an indication of what the other pretty ladies see in the Horse Lord ... still, she's not giving in. And I'm sure she has other schemes in mind. Small boats, perhaps? Rough seas? Delicious sea-treats with an excessive number of legs? (Or none at all.) I'm fascinated to see where her next move will take her.
Author's reply
Hi Bodkin, Like I said before she's been reading too many books on warfare. As Hyarmendacil says in his famous treatise: One should strike boldly and without regard to loss or else not at all. I had to chuckle when you enumerated all the other possible schemes - and you do tempt me, especially with those sea-treats - but actually what I think these two need is some quality time together. Being a kind and considering author I see it as my duty to provide them with it in a nice cosy place... Lia
Alison H · 28 May 2006 · Chapter 2: First passage at arms
Well, first blood in the battle goes to Lothiriel but at what price? Eomer was rightly disgusted by Lothririel's invitation that they be unfaithful to each other once married and I think she's bitten off more than she can chew.Her father will no doubt find out about her behaviour and be properly incensed, not to mention confused about her intentions. That smile of Eomer's could melt the coldest of hearts and Lothiriel was almost swooning until she caught herself--I want to shake her to make her see sense but I also understand her reasons for acting so horribly.She wants to be in charge of her own destiny and I can't fault her for that.She just has to be more tactful and less cruel. Also, kudos to Eomer for standing up to the Aunt from Hell.He certainly kept his temper but I'm glad Imrahil whisked her away when he did. So, no doubt there will be repercussions from Lothiriel's behaviour and I can't wait to read more of this.Poor Eomer, he needs a soul mate and I think he should lick his wounds and try again.Let the battle continue! Update soon. Ali.
Author's reply
Hi Ali, I see Lothiriel as starting to panic and ending up saying things she didn't really mean when Eomer just wouldn't give up. You are right though, the price was high. And these things have a way of coming out eventually! As for Eomer finding a soul mate, they have one thing in common at least: they are both very stubborn. But I think he rather likes a challenge. Yes, the battle will continue... Lia
Bodkin · 24 May 2006 · Chapter 1: Preliminary skirmishes
I don't quite know why, but the image of Lothiriel all kitted out in Barbie pink with a green veil over her hair makes me think of a fishing fly. Just presenting herself in the best way (quite against her will) to ensure that the predatory Eomer-fish snaps her up. She'd have been more nondescript in her favourite green frock. Camouflaged with all the rest of the available maidens displaying to attract the attention of Rohan's king. It must be infuriating for her to have her life sorted out for her without her consent - not that she would really have expected much say in the matter - but I don't think her protest is going to work!
Author's reply
Hello Bodkin, you might have a point there, she'll certainly stand out in the crowd. Well if the dress won't work, she'll just have to think of something else, won't she. Something tells me she's not one to give up easily and what is more, she's been reading to many books on warfare... Need I say more? Lia
Alatriel · 24 May 2006 · Chapter 1: Preliminary skirmishes
Oh, I can't wait for the next one. I love this, the anticipation of Lotti's foot in mouth disease that is yet to come. I've started laughing already. Can't wait to see what tricks she has up her sleeve. Good one Lia. Alatriel.
Author's reply
Hello Alatriel, Yeah, Lothiriel has quite a few tricks up her sleeve and absolutely no intention of pulling her punches. After all she had 3 months to plan this. You'll see! Lia
vampfan30 · 23 May 2006 · Chapter 1: Preliminary skirmishes
UHM..... is it in English or in a Tolkien language?? 'Cause, I read it three times, and I ain't seeing the "(dead?) sea creature" thing either..........
Author's reply
Hello Vampfan, you're thinking along the right lines. I'll send you the answer. Lia
Alison H · 23 May 2006 · Chapter 1: Preliminary skirmishes
This was very enjoyable, Lia! I'm so glad you're posting a new story. Lothiriel is armed and ready for battle and Eomer had better be ready to deal with an irate Princess who thinks of him as a barbarian.I can't wait! Well, unless Lothiriel was using seaweed as a veil I couldn't spot the sea creature.Was the dye in her dress taken from some sort of sea creature? Lothiriel has real grievances with her father and even though he tries to placate her, I can understand her hurt.She is an adult and her father, though he meant well, made a decision for her without speaking to her first.No wonder she is angry. Already I'm laughing at Amorothos and, so far, he has only smiled! I can't wait to find out what happens next.Will Amorothos help or hinder his sister and just what does Eomer think about *that* dress? Ha, no doubt Lothiriel could turn up in a sack if she looked at him with those eyes of hers! I love this already.Update soon! Ali.
Author's reply
Hi Ali, I just thought to have some fun with the 'arranged marriage' scenario, nothing too serious, and then that military theme just crept in. Poor Eomer has no idea he's in the middle of a war zone, although he might find out eventually. This is only going to be a short story (I'm still exhausted from the last one!) and Amrothos won't play much of a role, I'm afraid. It's mostly about Eomer and Lothiriel...and those black eyes of course. Thanks for leaving me a review, it's much appreciated! Lia