Reviews (8)

Grumpy · 17 June 2006 · Chapter 6: Moon Shadow

Poor Isildur even his bones don't get a finally resting place. I always thought the guy got a bum rap. One little moment with the ring, and all the good stuff he did is forgotten.

elliska · 11 June 2006 · Chapter 3: The Bane

Oh I like this addition, it makes a nice break for Isildur with the Moon that he had sworn to and it leads nicely into the next one. Great addition!

Armariel · 10 June 2006 · Chapter 6: Moon Shadow

Beautifully written, poetic and powerful. A true dance of words, brilliant!

elliska · 10 June 2006 · Chapter 6: Moon Shadow

Oh this was too sad--seeing him hoping that someone would finally lay his remains to rest and then the last line. Horrible. This was a very powerful series. So sad to see such noble deeds rewarded with such a horrible end.

elliska · 10 June 2006 · Chapter 5: Shadow of Fear

Ooo. Seeing this from the orcs' pov was really...nasty and scary. What a horrible death but what a scene from the orcs' pov.

elliska · 10 June 2006 · Chapter 4: Cold Comfort

I absolutely love how the theme of saving the tree and the moon (and now sun) continue to run through these. This is very clever.

elliska · 10 June 2006 · Chapter 2: Luminosity

I love how you have tied together this second rescue of the tree and the importance of the symbol of the moon--its aid in hiding the first act and its importance to Minas Ithil. Very clever.

elliska · 10 June 2006 · Chapter 1: Moon Devotion

This is one of my favorite moments--saving the Tree's fruit. I loved seeing it in this drabble.