Not the One For You by sheraiah
Legs18 · 8 January 2007 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
That was amazing! So funny, and I love how much they love and care for each other, and how romantic it is, yet it still totally fits as a big sister, little brother feeling. Don't worry twins, dark hair is handsome too!!!
Elflingimp · 16 June 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
That was very enjoyable I could just visualize the whole thing in my mind while I was reading it!
Fire · 13 June 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
A very lovely story, I could see the pictures it in my mind while reading. As to the twins conclusion, Yes they will definetly get competition, but perhaps less than they think.
Daynawayna · 13 June 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
Lovely story, Sheraiah! I don't seem to read stories with "young Legolas" or "young whomever", but this one looked good and I was right! I could see it in my mind, and I like the "young Legolas"... he's an imp, and precious! :D And also very kingly; I think he impressed Arwen and the twins completely. I liked the line: He was, for once without being instructed, wearing his circlet... which shows maturity, and just how sincere he was about escorting his cousin. I really liked that a lot. Thank you so much for giving us this glimpse into the daily lives of the wonderous elves! :)
Bodkin · 13 June 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
What a sweet Legolas. I think the twins are right to worry! He will be serious competition in a few years. Celemir was an ass, though. Well worth dropping. And it sounds as if he had other customers for his affections ready and waiting.
daw the minstrel · 12 June 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
The twins and Arwen are right: Legolas can be very charming when he likes. It's interesting to see him at this change point in his life, recently able to kiss Arwen's cheek without stretching but not yet part of the mating game himself.
harrowcat · 12 June 2006 · Chapter 1: Chapter One
I am glad that the Twins will be sensible enough to bow out gracefully! *g*