The Cave by Elanor Silmariën
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Arwen of Lorien
· 7 January 2007
· Chapter 1: The Cave
OMGoodness! I can't believe I haven't read this one! Great short story!
The beginning was cute and funny, Eryn is adorable. And poor Merry broke his leg! Little Boys are alway getting into trouble! tsk tsk. lol
I loved the end! Frodo waiting for the bottle, *Smiles*
--Yeah, heh, I cant send, but I can receive! Golds email was funny, the first paragraph was explaining how she knew I couldn't respond so she made all the questions rhetorical and on and on.
103! Oh dear! That isn't good. Hope you all are getting better!
Now I must go and do...THAT.
ttyl! God bless ~Arwen
Queen Galadriel
· 16 August 2006
· Chapter 1: The Cave
Oh, I love Eryn! She'll make a good mother one day LOL! She reminds me a little of how I imagine Esmeralda. And what a surprise ending! That Pippin should find that locket and get to send it across the sea, and for Frodo to receive it! Yes, I, too, can imagine the look on his face. Wonderful, Ellie!
God bless,
Galadriel
Author's reply
She just came to me one day, and I loved her too! She does remind of Esme, doesn't she! Glad you liked!
God bless,
Ellie
Antane
· 16 July 2006
· Chapter 1: The Cave
Oh, I love that last sentence! What a nice surprise he will get - you must write of it!
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
One of the readers who reviewed this on another site asked for more of that as well! I'd better get on it! Glad you liked it, mellon nin!G
God bless,
Ellie
harrowcat
· 15 July 2006
· Chapter 1: The Cave
That was an interesting way to tell this lovely little story Elanor. How sad that Frodo was prepared to sacrifice the locket just so long as the ring was safe. Glad to see that the messages in bottles are catching.
Author's reply
Thanks! I've always liked the message in the bottle thing.
God bless,
Ellie