Altariel · 7 December 2006 · Chapter 1: Rivendell
Very clever interweaving of 'The Council of Elrond' and 'The Window on the West'. I hope you update soon.
Better Choice by Peredhel
Reviews (10)
Altariel · 7 December 2006 · Chapter 0
Great start. I particularly love Eowyn's memory of Morwen.
Dreamflower · 26 July 2006 · Chapter 1: Rivendell
An excellent recasting of the Council from a different POV. I am *so* looking forward to seeing the events falling out as they could have, had Faramir actually taken the journey he was meant to take. This is going to be really interesting. I am very much interested in seeing his interactions with the other members of the Fellowship--Faramir already has an excellent relationship with Gandalf, and he lacks the suspicion of the Elves that Boromir held. It's going to be a very different dynamic...
Radbooks · 23 July 2006 · Chapter 1: Rivendell
This is an interesting tale so far and I'm anxious to see where it is going and how having Faramir on the quest will change things along the way. Will the quest succeed without Boromir's actions? It's an interesting idea. I liked how Erchiron took things into his own hands there... that was a fun way for it to happen. :) I like the way you write Faramir... a strong, noble man and very much a 'book' Faramir it seems to me. Looking forward to more.
Nienor Niniel · 23 July 2006 · Chapter 1: Rivendell
Oh, I am definitely intrigued! I wonder how things will develop: which consequences this will have on the quest. Will Frodo feel the need to leave the others when he isn't threatened by Boromir? And what about Denethor if Boromir doesn't die? So many questions, and I am looking forward to seeing them answered. Greetings, Nienor
Rugi · 23 July 2006 · Chapter 0
Wow. I read this on FF.net and I love it even better here. It is a bit amusing that Faramir wasn't sent to Imladris when he was so obviously the better choice. And I love the rather ruthless methods his cousin used to get him to be the one to go on the trip. And again I love Faramir in Rohan - Boromir seemed like he would fit in with the Rohirrim whereas Faramir seems otherworldly and more elven - and I can't get over how well Faramir deals with Wormtongue.
Author's reply
Thank you. Well, amusing and disastrous. I really think that it's strongly implied that it would have been better had he gone, so this should actually be somewhat *happier* than the original. If I ever get around to finishing it. Yes, Boromir is more an example of the future of Gondor, as it dwindles, than very much like contemporary Gondorians. Éomer says that Boromir is more like a Man of Rohan than the 'grave Men of Gondor'. He thinks this a good thing. And Faramir is one of the only characters actually compared to Elves, so . . . There is definitely an otherworldly aspect to him. Oh, I'm pleased you liked him with Wormtongue. A scene I didn't intend to write but just "happened" (the mental image of Denethor and Wormtongue was just too funny to leave out).
Raksha The Demon · 15 July 2006 · Chapter 0
A wonderful look at Faramir from Eowyn's POV, in Rohan, where he comes in Boromir's place in this AU. I loved the comparison to Morwen Steelsheen, very apt, since she was Imrahil's kin, and the confrontation with Wormtongue. I would also love to see Denethor have a discussion with Grima; he'd make verbal mincemeat of the nasty fellow. And the description of Grima as a pathetic mouse hunting a fierce cat (Faramir) - excellent. (though I also see Faramir as a wolf, because he is a social creature, and extremely loyal to friends and kin)
Author's reply
Thank you, again! Yes, Morwen is a relation, so it worked. Yes, Denethor could make many kinds of mincemeat out of him, I think. Oh, I don't really see Faramir as all that social, although certainly loyal. The cat image really came from his general habit of going his own way, and of course I imagine him as somewhat enigmatic in expression.
Daynawayna · 15 July 2006 · Chapter 0
OOooooo I am very intrigued. I love Faraimr and this could get veeerry interesting! I'm liking it so far.... and I won't flip ahead in cannon to compare what might happen at Amon Hen... :O ::clasps hands firmly over mouth::: Don't Kill him! ack! I did it again! ::tapes mouth shut:: LOL Sorry for the silliness. This looks very interesting and I can't wait for more! :)
Author's reply
I am very glad. Ah, Amon Hen. Let's all think positive thoughts!
sheraiah · 15 July 2006 · Chapter 0
Peredhel, This is a great start! I love your description of Faramir as seen by Eowyn. I can't wait to read more.
Author's reply
Thank you. He is one who is easier to describe through someone else's eyes than his own.
Dreamflower · 15 July 2006 · Chapter 0
Oh my! I think I am going to *love* this! I've often been tempted to do "Faramir-goes-to-Rivendell" but Men are not my forte--I'm much better at hobbits! I look forward to seeing how *this* one plays out! So far it's brilliant--I love the idea of Erchirion somehow seeing to Boromir's being incapacitated, and Faramir's knowing what he did, yet being complicit with it. And for Faramir to meet Eowyn *before* she meets Aragorn--very clever! I can't wait to see where you go with it. Needless to say, I very much look forward to his interaction with the Fellowship, especially the hobbits, and most especially with Frodo and with Pippin!
Author's reply
Thank you! Well, I hope you enjoy it. I have some strongly-held opinions about it! Pippin is definitely the funnest to write.