Taking Care by swg12

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Queen Galadriel · 20 August 2006 · Chapter 1: Sneezes and Sniffles

Oh dear, dear, dear. Poor Frodo does seem to bring these little troubles down on himself, doesn't he? I'm just glad it's only a cold, and Sam is there, which, of course, means everything is going to be all right in time. :) I love your stories, SWG! And I love your ditty and the rainbow shoelaces. LOL! More, more, pretty please with lots and lots of sugar on top! God bless, Galadriel

Author's reply

Ah, poor poor Frodo ... Thanks so much for the lovely review once again and enjoy those shoelaces! ;) ~ swg ~

JULES6 · 6 August 2006 · Chapter 1: Sneezes and Sniffles

Hello, At this point in the story: "Yes, but I wanted to see the moon! Did you see it last night, Sam?" I was waiting for Sam to throw his hands up in the air with frustration at his master's antics. LOL Sam will have to be firm with his patient to keep him in bed - but I am sure he will take good care of Frodo. Thanks for sharing. JULES6

Author's reply

Those silly hobbit gentry! Having their heads in the clouds all the time, not like sensible hobbits! ;) Thanks for reading! ~ swg ~

shirebound · 6 August 2006 · Chapter 1: Sneezes and Sniffles

Looks like a very sweet story. I do love it when Frodo gets lots of TLC. (May I gently suggest a spell-check of your chapters? Words like 'recieving' and 'fro' tend to be distracting. And... why is Sam called 'the Gamgee'?)

Author's reply

a review from shirebound? yay! ah, thanks for the suggestion. I will check that - it was rather late when I did it. I stole "the Gamgee" from my friend cuz I get sick of typing "Sam" over and over and sometimes it gets confusing as to which "he" I mean, but I'll look over it and try to take them out. Thanks so much for reading and for your help! ~ swg ~

Antane · 6 August 2006 · Chapter 1: Sneezes and Sniffles

Ah dear Sam, getting up early to take care of his Frodo. Always taking care. Thank you for the shoelaces, but I am still waiting for my cookie. :) But then if Sam's busy with his dear, I can wait... Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author's reply

ah, the cookie! so sorry! here - take two and your cup of tea ... and the shoelaces. :) Yes, Samwise Gamgee ... wonder how much it'd cost me to rent one? ;) Thanks again for reading! ~ swg ~

Armariel · 6 August 2006 · Chapter 1: Sneezes and Sniffles

*snicker* love the ditty...and hey, rainbow shoelaces are nice too, hehehehe.... One point: when people have fevers, their faces are flushed, not pale....That aside, lovely chappie, such a nice description of moonlight, and the characterizations are spot-on! hugs Armariel ~~~{~@

Author's reply

one pair of rainbow shoelaces, coming up! Glad you liked it :) Thanks for pointing out the error to me - I shall fix it post haste! ~ swg ~

XtremeFrolicker · 5 August 2006 · Chapter 1: Sneezes and Sniffles

O i absolutely love Sam!! I wish i had him to take care of me when i have a cold! I very much like how you have portrayed him...keep the stories coming!

Author's reply

Thank you thank you! I will definately keep them coming - there's plenty of Sam to go around :) ~ swg ~

Armariel · 5 August 2006 · Chapter 0: Calm Before the Storm ...

Oh I could use a sugar cookie and a nice cuppa.....heheh.....and I hope Frodo is a bit of a naughty patient and will make a fuss about taking his medicine *hands Sam a package of Sudafed* and that Sam will have his hands full and then catch the cold and Frodo will have to nurse him for a while and have HIS hands full and so on and so forth *stretches out hands for tea and cookie* ~~~{~@

Author's reply

*hands over tea and cookie to Armariel* Here you go then! Glad you enjoyed! Ah, well we'll see where it goes - I really have no clue at this point, lol. ~ swg ~

JULES6 · 5 August 2006 · Chapter 0: Calm Before the Storm ...

Hello, Love the penname and certainly liked the opening chapter. Nice to see a little bit of fluff and hopefully lots more from Mr Gamgee Hope to see more soon. Thanks for sharing your story and your writing. JULES6

Author's reply

Thanks so much for reading - I like my penname too :) .. I go by swg for short, btw yes, fluff! the stuff that keeps us all alive! Thanks again for reviewing - there's definately more to come! ~ swg ~

Antane · 5 August 2006 · Chapter 0: Calm Before the Storm ...

Looking forward to more of this - love these TLC stories. My favorite part were the brush of the curls and the idea of eyes getting tired and the rest following. :) Namarie, God bless, Antane

Author's reply

Thanks so much for reading, Antane! I'm glad you liked it. I love TLC stories too - so sweet and fluffy! :) I'm hoping I'll be able to hash out what on earth is going to happen in this story - at the moment my little plot bunny is hopping around and I'm just having to try to follow it ;) ~ swg ~