Temporary Companion by Edoraslass
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EverleighBain
· 27 October 2013
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
Hello! This story made me smile, especially when I realized who the young Took in question was. I wonder if in later years the connection was ever made?
Lovely imagery and dialogue. Keep up the good work!
Cairistiona
· 27 January 2011
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
I just discovered this lovely little story, referred to me by a friend. What a charming picture of lonely Strider having to fight his heart lest he become too fond of a puppy he could never hope to keep. It makes me wonder if maybe as a child he might have had a much-loved dog. That last line was perfect--not overly sentimental but perfectly shows just how lonely Strider's life was at that time, how much he had to sacrifice to do his duty, and how much he really did get attached to the little fellow. Really a nice story--I'm glad I found it!
Daynawayna
· 2 June 2007
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
OOOOOHHHHHhhhhhhhoooOOO! Hooooow cuuuuuuuute! Of course Strider has a soft side, and I love it! The pangs of regret speak such volumes, and your closing:
But he’d grown used to the pup’s snoring and the solid ball of warmth tucked against his chest, and it took him a bit longer than usual to get to sleep that night. ... How precious! Poor Strider! The things he's given up to protect Middle earth!
I say we need another story: this one about a Kings birthday, and a gift given to him by his young knight Pippin... from a litter of pups born not too long ago... them being of a Grand Line of dogs begat from Pippin's favorite Constant Companion...
::grins wickedly:: I'm VERY GOOD at providing plot bunnies: just ask Cuthalion and Pearl Took! LOL Lookit! I even gave you a TITLE for pity's sake! :::bats her eyes at you:: pretty pretty please!?!? :)
OK, I'm sorry. I shouldn't scare you like this, this being my first review of your stories and all. I tend to get a little excited. LOL (a little?!?!) :D
Author's reply
Here I am, late in replying as per usual.
I do think it's such a shame, that Strider couldn't even have a dog to keep him company while wandering around - there's one creature who'd never sneer at him just because he was dirty and raggedy looking!
I have occasionally toyed with the idea of a Pippin-puppy story, but it's really kind of hard for me to write dogs, since I'm so very much a cat person. Maybe it'll pop up one day.
Thank you!
Linda Hoyland
· 18 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
This was just delightful.I loved to see this caring and warm side of Aragorn.
Author's reply
Strider's about the easiest version of Aragorn for me to write; he seems much more comfortable as a Ranger.
Thank you!
Bodkin
· 15 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
Sweet. Must have been hard for a lonely man to give up the puppy - but it was best for the dog, and Strider is very good at putting others first.
Author's reply
Yep, I think all that time alone will feel just a bit more lonely now, at least for a while.
Thanks!
Larner
· 12 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
So, Pippin has kindred in Bree, does he? Interesting, I must say; and to have the tie to Aragorn is wonderful. And am very glad Strider has more hope for the pup than to let Ferny have it.
Nice to see so many of our friends and acquaintances included here.
Author's reply
I just imagined that Pip had family everywhere, no manner how distantly related they might be. And I keep thinking about doing something where adult Pippin realizes where his beloved dog came from!
Thank you, and sorry I took so so long to answer!
grumpy
· 11 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
To bad he could not keep the puppy, but at least it went to a good home, and not to Bill Ferny.
Author's reply
I think Strider would have taken the puppy with him before he'd give it to Bill Ferny.
Thank you!
Dreamflower
· 11 December 2006
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How sweet and adorable. Yes, Aragorn would take good care of a little orphan like the pup. I find it very ironic that he ended up destined for Pippin, LOL! I wonder if in later years, Pippin and Strider compare notes, and realize where the pup ended up--that would be fun to see!
Author's reply
I wonder if in later years, Pippin and Strider compare notes, and realize where the pup ended up
I've definitely considered it, because you're right, that would be great fun to see!
Thanks!
Jay of Lasgalen
· 11 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
I've got a bg grin after reading this! Very sweet, but not mawkish - well done!
I was a bit worried when Bill Ferny offered to take the dog - not that Strider would ever let him - but I loved Nob's swift reaction!
Pippin will be thrilled with his birthday present, but poor Strider is going to be rather lonely now.
Jay
Author's reply
but I loved Nob's swift reaction!
I've always had a sneaking fondness for Nob - I really should try to write him more.
Thanks!
harrowcat
· 11 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
Awwww. Lovely Pup and kind-hearted Strider and deep=sighted hobbit. What could be better.
Author's reply
And a new owner with just as much energy as the puppy.
Thank you!
Raksha The Demon
· 11 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Strider and a puppy!
And an extra squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee for Strider becoming reluctantly attached to the critter, and for finding him what sounds like the best home in Middle-earth.
(Note to dog owners - the story illustrates the importance of brushing one's dog's teeth, beginning when they're puppies (very lightly and gently to start with, especially with teething youngsters) - if they're accustomed to it when young, they'll always let you do it, and there are varieties of canine toothpaste and toothbrushes available now.)
Author's reply
Hee heeee..it's hard not get attached to enthusiastic little puppies, isn't it?
and yes, I firmly believe that everyone should brush their dog's teeth, cause, ooh, what a smell that can be!
Thanks, Raksha!
Tigger
· 11 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
Ah HA!! I had a feeling the birthday hobbit was Pippin!! How perfectly fluffy and adorable this is. Strider and a puppy...Sigh!! He would miss the lil guy too. But as he said, a Ranger just can't have a puppy. No matter how much he would want one.
What a wonderful thing to read on a very chilly night. Thanks Edoraslass!! :o)
Author's reply
Ranger just can't have a puppy. No matter how much he would want one.
But now he's King, and he can have all the puppies he wants! Huzzah!
Thanks!
Radbooks
· 10 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
I enjoyed this very much. Of course it would have been impossible for Aragorn to have a dog in the wild, especially a puppy, but it was nice that he got to enjoy one for just a bit. Nothing warms the heart like a puppy - unless it's a kitten! The people of Bree got to see him in a bit of a different light too. I loved the fact that Pippin ended up with the puppy! That was clever and you just know the dog will be spoiled. :) Thanks for sharing.
Author's reply
I loved the fact that Pippin ended up with the puppy! That was clever and you just know the dog will be spoiled.
Pippin and his dog are going to terrorize everyone, I just know it. No pie will be safe now. :)
Thanks!
Rugi
· 10 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
Okay Strider with a puppy seems ridiculously mawkish and silly until you actually SEE Strider with the puppy and find out that it works perfectly. I loved your description of the wriggly bundle of energy. I think the puppy really showed the side of Aragorn that we see when he dealing most gently with the Hobbits - I could imagine him side-tracking to find a home for a puppy.
Also liked the comment about never meeting so many dog-lovers who don't want a dog. You'll never meet so many people ready to cuddle a puppy for five minutes only as when your trying to give one away.
Author's reply
I think the puppy really showed the side of Aragorn that we see when he dealing most gently with the Hobbits
Yes, I think he greatly enjoys looking after those who need to be looked after; it's just not always evident when he's hanging out with capable Rangers.
Thanks!
meckinock
· 10 December 2006
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This was really sweet while keeping Strider wonderfully in character. I was glad to see him so determined to find the pup a good home, and I felt sorry for him that he couldn't allow himself to think of the dog as his own. I also laughed at Strider finding so many dog-loving people who didn't seem to need a dog! I've been in a similar position and the smiles and nods and lack of an offer were right on target!
Author's reply
I also laughed at Strider finding so many dog-loving people who didn't seem to need a dog!
I have to admit, I will stop and snuggle free puppies, but I've never taken one. It's just impossible to not snuggle them!
Thank you!
shirebound
· 10 December 2006
· Chapter 1: Temporary Companion
This is a darling story, giving Strider a few moments of warmth and companionship he rarely knows. (And letting eyes see that can that *he* is a man of compassion, himself.)
"I think this little fellow would find a good home there among all them mad, dog-loving, child-spoiling Tooks.”
How lovely. Perhaps someday Strider will meet this dog again, and they will remember one another with fondness.
Author's reply
letting eyes see that can that *he* is a man of compassion, himself.)
Yep, he is - he just can't always let himself be, if that makes sense. And a puppy certainly doesn't expect much from him. :)
Thanks!