SurgicalSteel · 20 March 2007 · Chapter 7: Author's Notes
These are all beautifully done.
Author's reply
:) Glad you like them.
Burdens by A. Meril
Reviews (9)
Larner · 19 March 2007 · Chapter 7: Author's Notes
A wonderful collection.
Author's reply
Thank you. :)
Larner · 19 March 2007 · Chapter 6: Faith, Memories, Vengeance
Feanor carried himself the greatest burden of guilt, having been caught, in his own unique manner, in Melkor's own defiance of his brethren; and what it cost those who followed him!
Larner · 19 March 2007 · Chapter 5: A Sword and a Ring
Each of these burdens is small in and of itself, but speaks of the horrors of the horrible fratricide and lost ones, sundered by choice or death--or both.
Larner · 19 March 2007 · Chapter 4: A Book
There is hope in this heart, at least.
Larner · 19 March 2007 · Chapter 3: Coimas
Yes, he would want to keep his children with him, particularly in that case.
Larner · 19 March 2007 · Chapter 2: A Necklace
A moment of great grief and guilt there.
Larner · 19 March 2007 · Chapter 1: The World's Weight
Oh, how we don't wish to share that weight with one another, although we do carry it.
MithLuin · 19 March 2007 · Chapter 7: Author's Notes
Nicely done - I like how you picked the unknown followers, not the leaders, to focus on.
Author's reply
Thanks! I always wonder what it was like for the little people, the ones who are never named in the books.