Reviews (57)

Mairi · 9 August 2007 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: In Which There is a Reunion

I really enjoyed this, and I think it would be nice to see a few chapters from another point of view. But keep doing some from Eldarion's point of view, as well- it's an interesting viewpoint.

Linda Hoyland · 7 August 2007 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: In Which There is a Reunion

What a lovely reunion! I am so glad the Princess has found her true love thanks to Eldarion..This caring boy is very like his father !

Larner · 7 August 2007 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: In Which There is a Reunion

Ah, yes, as lovely as was necessary! How wonderful to see this reunion made, and a renewed life together for two so deserving of happiness.

Lady Bluejay · 7 August 2007 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: In Which There is a Reunion

What a lovely story - I have just read the whole lot in-between cooking and chores! Beautifully written with wonderful little details. Thanks. LBJ

Dreamflower · 7 August 2007 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: In Which There is a Reunion

Oh, and by the way--I thought Eldarion's POV was just right. But I wouldn't say "no" to a glimpse into Seraphine's mind when she saw her long-lost husband! *grin*

Dreamflower · 7 August 2007 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: In Which There is a Reunion

*grin* I knew it! What a sweet reunion! I'm very glad that you made it quite straightforward, and didn't drag it out! Also, I just loved the image of Imrahil and Eldarion, sopping wet in the sand and tide as they tried to do the raking--that was adorable!

shirebound · 7 August 2007 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: In Which There is a Reunion

a smile of devastating joy How perfectly lovely. :)

harrowcat · 7 August 2007 · Chapter 10: Chapter Ten: In Which There is a Reunion

Yep! *pleased grin* I was right!

Larner · 5 August 2007 · Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In Which There Are Oysters

Aha! Now we come to it! A bird of an oystercatcher who once was noble, now finds himself contemplating the finding of a great pearl he'd thought lost forever! Excellent!

Tigger · 5 August 2007 · Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In Which There Are Oysters

Why, you cunning little author you. :o) I am so hoping that Jacoby is who I think he is from the reaction of him to Seraphine's name. I hope that is. I've come to love this character and after hearing about what happened to her in Harad...She deserves a Happily Ever After kind of a thing. At least I hope that's what is coming at the future clam bake. Loved the little Princess' innocent remark about how her Mother won't tell her about those strange reaction oysters can give to adults and poor Seraphine w/water in her mouth too. How is it that little ones always seem to have the timing to do that to us? ;o) Just one thing...Check your first paragraph m'dear. You've got them in Harad instead of Dol Amroth. Other than that....A very interesting chapter w/a promise of quite the clam bake coming up in the future. Can't wait to attend that little event myself. :o) Needless to say...I can't wait for the next chapter. :oD

Linda Hoyland · 4 August 2007 · Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In Which There Are Oysters

A delightful chapter. I hope a happy ending is in sight !

shirebound · 4 August 2007 · Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In Which There Are Oysters

Eldarion is such a lovely, friendly, open young lad, a joy to all who meet him. I'm glad the lonely oysterman is invited to the clam bake. And I'm with Miriel, I wouldn't want to hold a crab either!

Dreamflower · 4 August 2007 · Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In Which There Are Oysters

Yay!! Yaay!! Yipp!! I *knew* it!! I *knew* it!!! And "Bonny Broom" is a favorite song of mine!

harrowcat · 4 August 2007 · Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In Which There Are Oysters

oooooh! Mystery man from Harad! Can't wait to see if my guess is correct!

AM · 4 August 2007 · Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: In Which There Are Oysters

Fingers, and toes, crossed.

harrowcat · 4 August 2007 · Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: In Which There Are Answers

I am glad that he got up the courage to tell her what he had heard. Lovely couple of chapters.

Linda Hoyland · 3 August 2007 · Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: In Which There Are Answers

Poor Seraphine, i never guessed her story was so sad! I love little eldarion's caring nature, truly the son of his parents.I agree that Aragorn collects family.

Dreamflower · 3 August 2007 · Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: In Which There Are Answers

I have long suspected tragedy behind Seraphine's exile, and it seems I was right. It's a very sad story--and yet, somehow, I have a sneaky suspicion that it may not remain sad. How, for example, did that fisherman come to know it, and why did he say her husband was only "presumed" dead? Could it be possible her love might return some day? I do like Eldarion's response to the story: he immediately wants to cling to his own mother, for the idea of the little son and his mother being separated obviously struck a chord within him. And then, with the straightforward honesty he inherits from both parents, he lays the story before Seraphine for confirmation or denial. Seraphine's song sounds slightly familiar--is it an old Scottish tune? (By the way, your formatting seems to have gone slightly awry. Did you mean for the second half of the story to be all in bold?)

Bodkin · 2 August 2007 · Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: In Which There Are Answers

Eldarion is very young, whatever he might think. He hasn't yet grasped the connection between tragic histories and the people he knows - it shouldn't take much longer, not considering the people who surround him, most of whom have some ghastly tale in their pasts. Seraphine deals with him very well - and I daresay she's had time enough to grow accustomed. Even though the loss is always there, the pain dims. And Eldarion is a good distraction, even if he must remind her of her son.

Larner · 2 August 2007 · Chapter 8: Chapter Eight: In Which There Are Answers

It is a sad way to learn the truth of one you've come to respect and honor; and the offer to make her part of the family is part and parcel of the way I believe Aragorn's children would act. So many beloved brothers not born to him Aragorn had, so much loss he knew, having accepted that for himself this was to be expected as the Dunedan. And now a sister of sorts....

Bodkin · 2 August 2007 · Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: In Which Stories Are Told

Terrible stories, indeed - like most fairytales are, if you only think about them a bit! Eldarion might end up wishing he hadn't asked to hear this story. I've a feeling it could be one to keep him awake at night.

Larner · 1 August 2007 · Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: In Which Stories Are Told

We have a bit of the Odyssey, a bit of the Little Mermaid slightly altered, and a Welsh tale of the selkies, apparently; and now one of loss and grief.

Linda Hoyland · 31 July 2007 · Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: In Which Stories Are Told

I had to smile at sea obsessed Legolas. I recognised the Odsessy sp?, The Little Mermaid and I think the Lorelei amongst the stories. I eagerly await more.

Dreamflower · 31 July 2007 · Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: In Which Stories Are Told

Oh, I like this chapter! I think that Eldarion is going to learn a good deal about the princess! The stories were well-adapted to M-e, and I also like the anecdote about Legolas' reaction to being around the sea! Look forward to more!

shirebound · 31 July 2007 · Chapter 7: Chapter Seven: In Which Stories Are Told

Ohhh, that's sad about Legolas, but it makes sense. It's fascinating to "see the sea", and its effects on others, through the eyes of a royal child.