Reviews (4)

Bravo! This is so well written and so sad. Does he ever find Rumil?

Wow... I really enjoyed this story. The spider's thread really symobolized the tension that rang throughout this whole story. Poor Orophin. I really feel for him, to not only lose one brother but also not know where the other is. Do you think you could please write another chapter??? I would love to read where Orophin finally finds Rumil, whether dead or alive. Or maybe, you could write that he nevers finds his brother. Wouldn't that be an interesting twist? If you are intruiged to write anything more, I strongly encourage it and look forward to reading it! Great story! ~Vicki

Good chapter - I liked the ideo of Oropher being there - if one goes by PJ's version of Helm's Deep - and that Rumil was there also... brothers guarding the back of each other. I didn't see an 'The End' - so I'm hoping there' s more.

An extraordinarily sad movie-verse scene. So, in this version only one will likely return to the Golden Wood for what time remains to the Elves of Middle Earth; and it will be probably a time before Haldir and Rumil might be rehoused.