Beruthiels Cat
· 8 May 2007
· Chapter 1
Interesting twist...It makes you think Elros could have died with doubt in his mind. Love his admonition at the end!
BC
Author's reply
It was a good thing he didn't have any doubts. This is when foresight comes in handy! :)
~Calenlass
Nessa
· 8 May 2007
· Chapter 1
Excellent. Keep them coming....you have poetry in your soul...
Nessa
Author's reply
Poetry in my soul...
I like the sound of that. :)
Thank for the comment!
~Calenlass
shirebound
· 7 May 2007
· Chapter 1
That's wonderful. Who's to say Elros wasn't as foresighted as his brother? I'm glad he can see far enough ahead to know that some of his line will stay true.
Author's reply
I couldn't agree more.
~Calenlass
Larner
· 7 May 2007
· Chapter 1
Alas that such as Elros should foresee such things!
Adunaic doesn't have much of a vocabulary provided for us to peruse, does it?
Author's reply
I think I would've died at that moment, seeing what will come to pass.
And no, it doesn't. *frowns* I managed to find a dictionary, but it's also very limited.
At least I was able to find "Elendili" and "Endurance." :)
Thanks, Larner, for commenting on everything I posted. I appreciated them!
~Cal