The Theft of Pippin's Heart by PipMer

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Mairi · 8 August 2007 · Chapter 1

Very nice. When Pippin and the others are talking, it actually sounds like hobbits talking, which I know I would have difficulty doing. However, I have to say it would be nice if you made some of the longer paragraphs into two.

Author's reply

Thank you, Mairi. Dialogue can be difficult, that's for sure. I appreciate your comments. Thanks for reading!

Larner · 8 August 2007 · Chapter 1

He's learned to trust Frodo's instincts, and with reason. If only he could have found healing there in the Shire. Lovely and thoughtful.

Author's reply

Thank you so much, Larner! I will always wish that Frodo could have found healing by staying in the Shire. It's sad that he had to leave everything behind.