Belen Menel by Fadesintothewest
Stefania · 25 March 2008 · Chapter 1: “Abandon All Hope”
Your quirky and amusing style piques my interest. I'm intrigued by the thought of a Gondorian mystery story, especially one set near the Elvish enclave of South Ithilien. Plus the narrator's voice intrigues me and pulls me in. - Steff
Janet · 18 March 2008 · Chapter 4: Iarwain, Oldest
I am enjoying this story. I like the mysteries and enchantment of the woodland elves and how they are connected to the forest and find joy in their dancing. Janet
Author's reply
I am glad you are enjoying the story! I too love wood elves.
Linda Hoyland · 18 March 2008 · Chapter 6: Anticipation and Regret
You make a very good point about the problems of adjusting to peace.
Author's reply
Thank You! I was hoping I could convey that sentiment.
Linda Hoyland · 13 March 2008 · Chapter 2: A Home in Emyn Arnen
A delightful glimpse of Eowyn's life in Ithilien.I like Hild.
Author's reply
I am glad you liked Hild. Eowyn's life, it is the good life!
Neilia · 26 November 2007 · Chapter 3: The White House
Okay, now I am totally intrigued. This is a great story. A keeper. Neilia
Author's reply
I am glad you like it :-) The next chapter is almost done!
Anonymous · 22 November 2007 · Chapter 1: “Abandon All Hope”
Looks interesting - I wonder if the similarities to the beginning of Dante's Inferno were intentional?
Author's reply
Thanks for the reply. The similarities were intentional, I hope in a good way :)