Estelcontar · 7 February 2008 · Chapter 1: The Vase that was Broken
Linda, I like the original version a lot, but I like this improved version even better.
Author's reply
Thank you,I'm pleased you like this more polished version.
The Vase that was Broken by Linda Hoyland
Reviews (7)
Agape4Gondor · 6 February 2008 · Chapter 1: The Vase that was Broken
Nice tale. I found this little bit priceless... 'The King’s heart was in his mouth when his Queen returned and took her accustomed place in her sitting room. He decided to wait for her to notice the vase before confessing his mishap with her treasured heirloom.'
Author's reply
Thank you,I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Raksha The Demon · 6 February 2008 · Chapter 1: The Vase that was Broken
Heee! Gotta watch those spoons; they can be lethal weapons, especially in the destruction of vases. Very funny story. Poor Aragorn, having to examine all those vases and decide on one. A King's work is never done!
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I can't imagine Aragorn enjoying choosing vases somehow. I'm pleased this mused you.
Radbooks · 6 February 2008 · Chapter 1: The Vase that was Broken
Very cute... and so very true to life! :)
Author's reply
Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed this.It was actually inspired by seeing two adult men(friends since childhod)having a mock battle with wooden spoons when I visited some friends!
Nieriel Raina · 5 February 2008 · Chapter 1: The Vase that was Broken
Oh I loved this one, Linda. The EE is even better! Great job!
Author's reply
Thank you so much.I'm pleased you enjoyed it.I like going back to the prompts after a few weeks as I can often think of a way of doing it better.
Larner · 5 February 2008 · Chapter 1: The Vase that was Broken
Ah, a wise mother! How wonderful that she'd thought to put the good one away! Heh! Poor Aragorn--all that work apparently for nothing....
Author's reply
I'm pleased you enjoyed this.Welcome back! I hope your new ISP is an improvement for you.I think Aragorn unestimates Arwen at times!
shirebound · 5 February 2008 · Chapter 1: The Vase that was Broken
This is adorable, and your title is so clever! :)
Author's reply
Thank you, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it!