Nikara
· 17 February 2004
· Chapter 12: Fidgiting and Funerals
Sorry that it took me forever to review this. I must have missed it when it came out. Okay chapter, although it was a bit short(and the song was a bit long). I look forward to reading more!
finafyr
· 30 January 2004
· Chapter 11: Many Tragedies (can things get any worse?)
So far I had been enjoying the story.. but I can tell you that I am not pleased with the death of one of the twins.. hummm I may have to rethink my thoughts about how much I was enjoying this story.. even if it was a bit strange... can we please take care of the problem.. (sigh)
finafyr
· 30 January 2004
· Chapter 6: A Little Help From Above
I am surprised that I am enjoying this story.. you captured my attention with the first page... is it possible that the dog is either Gandalf or Durin..
keep up the good work.. well done.. well done indeed
xsilicax
· 7 January 2004
· Chapter 11: Many Tragedies (can things get any worse?)
NO!
No Cor, NO!
Please tell me that I read that last sentence wrong, that he's merely unconscious, that Aragorn is going to drift down from whever he is hidden and save the poor elf?
Please, kill Legolas and let Elladan live!
I did love how you threw in the comment about Earendil's star being no longer there, but not a llowing Elrohir time to process what this might mean. I can only hope that once he recovers somewhat from the grief at his brother's death he will remember and reflect back upon it, for I love what it represents.
Cathy,
(who is demanding more, now!)
xx
Author's reply
lol Elladan is definitely dead. That is all I will say on that subject, I am currently working on the next chapter, it should be up soon.
Thanks for the lovely compliments...and WHEN are you going to update YOUR fic, hmmm?
XOXO
Cor
Nikara
· 5 November 2003
· Chapter 11: Many Tragedies (can things get any worse?)
Oh my word. The only reason I'm sparing your life is that you need to right more. Please add soon- This was a horrible cliff hanger. I can't believe that you did that to us! Poor everyone! I need more NOW!
Author's reply
wow, people get really upset about this stuff!
I happen to ENJOY leaving cliffies, it gets me LOTS of reviews! However, I do appreciate you sparing my life. No worries, I'm working on an update as we speak, you'll get it in a week or so ^_^
XOXO
Cor
Lucia
· 5 November 2003
· Chapter 11: Many Tragedies (can things get any worse?)
Okay so normally I don't leave reviews, I know I should but I never get around to it. But I have to say something...YOU DID WHAT!? AHHHHH! NOOOOOoooo... I've been following this story since the second chapter and I can't believe it. I can't help it I'm completely hooked. Please, please update soon.
Author's reply
Well, I appreciate you coming out of Lurkwood to review me!
Lol, please don't be too upset, I wouldn't want to affect your digestion or something ^_^
I'm working on an update even as we speak, so you should have it in a week or so.
XOXO
Cor
Deana
· 26 October 2003
· Chapter 10: Hope
This story is very good! I usually skip over the Valinor stories, but something made me read this one, and I'm glad I did! Great job, please post more!
Author's reply
I'm glad you liked it! I just posted, I hope you enjoy this chapter as well ^_^
XOXO
Cor
LKK
· 14 October 2003
· Chapter 10: Hope
Thank goodness Elrond removed that device from Glorfindel. I was beginning to think you had forgotten him.
Your story is very suspenseful, Coreinha. The Japanese assasin surprised me greatly. I wasn't expecting her. Looking forward to the next confrontation between assasin and elves!
LKK
Author's reply
I would NEVER forget any of my characters, not even Cell-hu, who I've recently been accused of forgetting ^_^ He's around, just not a big part of the plot right now, you'll see more of him soon, I promise.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story, to me, Xiaoli seemed an obvious turn, to pit the elves against a type of fighting they've never experienced before, well it just sounded interesting to me ^_^
As for the next confrontation,you won't have to wait too long, in ch 11 or 12, most likely
XOXO
Cor
Nikara
· 29 September 2003
· Chapter 8: Answers?
Oh my gosh! This story is amazing. An incredible blend of Silmarillion with present day fic. You have done a wonderful job and even have included all of my favorite characters! I can't wait until you add more-this is simply incredible!
Author's reply
wow, thanks!
I'm having a lot of fun writing this fic, too! I'll work on the next chapter tomorrow (I have no classes on Tuesdays) and maybe it will be out by this weekend! *cross your fingers!
XOXO
Cor
LKK
· 18 September 2003
· Chapter 8: Answers?
panics
Update faster! Update faster! You can't leave Glorfindel like that!
calms down a little & tries not to focus on elf-lord torture
Elrohir drawing clothing on the nude photos made me laugh. So did the image of Legolas and him dueling with dandilions. I love the fact that you rocket the story from humor to shudders horrible elf torture. You're creating quite a roller coaster ride. Good job!
Now... UPDATE!!!!
Author's reply
thanks!
As you can tell, I have a slightly warped sense of humor, and it tends to come out in my writing *G*
And I LOVE writing cliffies, as for the elf-lord-torture, blame Songbird, she's the one who gave me a link to a site on medieval torture methods. Really!
Don't worry, they'll be okay... I think
XOXO
Cor
Lisette
· 4 September 2003
· Chapter 3: Woe and Worry
Looking good so far! I'm enjoying the older Legolas and the twins, although having Aragorn come back was probably the best... not to mention the puppy. I see that you're shooting for a particular breed - which? A collie? Siberian husky??
In any case, you write well and story is certainly flowing along - please keep posting. I look forward to more! ;p
Author's reply
it actually is a Collie, and I'll hit on that at some point in the story, lol. (I have a collie, and I'm convinced the breed had to originate among the elves, as they're such wonderful, intelligent animals)
Thanks for the compliments!
XOXO
Cor