Tante
· 30 April 2008
· Chapter 1: A Seaside Evening
That was utterly charming.
The romantic story in the middle followed by the scene on the beach were beautiful in their timing, atmosphere and effect. My favorite parts.
Well done!
Author's reply
Thank you! :) I'm glad I succeeded in one of my goals, at least (that is, to get the scene and atmosphere just right).
Linda Hoyland
· 28 February 2008
· Chapter 1: A Seaside Evening
What a delightful romantic story!
Author's reply
I meant it for Valentine's -- I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Larner
· 26 February 2008
· Chapter 1: A Seaside Evening
Oh, I rather think he has found the best sea treasure of the lot!
Author's reply
And I am quite sure Eomer agrees with you, too. ;)
Thanks for reviewing!
Elena Tiriel
· 25 February 2008
· Chapter 1: A Seaside Evening
What a lovely vignette! I enjoyed the story-within-a-story, and was amused by Éomer's surprise that two normal people could have such a romantic love story. And it seems that it opened new ways of thinking for both Éomer and Lothíriel... with very satisfactory results.
Well done!
- Barbara
Author's reply
Thank you, your review really made my day. I AM rather fond of stories-within-stories. :)