cathleen · 30 March 2008 · Chapter 0: Prologue
Oh, this is off to a wonderful start!
Author's reply
Thanks, cathleen! I hope the rest remains as wonderful to read... it definitely was a joy to write ;)
When Trouble Came by Lily Dragonquill
Reviews (30)
Periantari · 22 March 2008 · Chapter 0: Prologue
ooo Very exciting beginning so far! There are so many questions to answer with that thrilling and angsty beginning. I eagerly await more. :)
Author's reply
And they will be answered... at least I hope so :)
SlightlyTookish · 22 March 2008 · Chapter 0: Prologue
You can ramble at me any time! :) This looks great, a very powerful beginning! I love the Took Sight (as you know) and Paladin's dream is a great way of showing what is going on in Buckland. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's reply
Ah, but is his dream true? It might be, and yet his mind might paint a darker picture than is true. He doesn't know and neither do we.
Larner · 22 March 2008 · Chapter 0: Prologue
All are besieged. After all, who within the Shire would expect to be so betrayed by their own? It was perhaps poetic justice that Lotho died as a result of his own machinations, but it makes it no less sad for all of that.
Author's reply
A betrayal like that neither could expect but I think Lotho's death made it easier for the hobbits to forgive him.
Andrea · 22 March 2008 · Chapter 0: Prologue
Dear Lily, Wow! What a beginning! Paladin's vision was very disturbing. I call it a vision, because he is a Took. Of course we know that not all visions come true, but *he* does not know what the future will bring. So I can feel with him, torn between the Tooklands and Buckland, where his daughter and sister are! And what about Merimac with all the blood on his hands? Anyway, I'm hooked :) Can't wait for the next chapter! And to make sure that you won't forget your mother-tongue: Frohe Ostern Dir, Deinen Freunden und Deiner Familie!
Author's reply
Paladin's vision is indeed very dark, but he doesn't know the truth. His mind may paint a darker picture because he is troubled about his own people as well - and yet it might not. The blood will be explained. Frohe Ostern! :)