Reviews (277)

Grey Wonderer · 20 June 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

This is excellent. I love the way the hobbits are getting ready to take care of Aragorn. I also like all of the teasing that Pippin has been doing in this bit and poor Gandalf certainly did get hit with questions and advice when he arrived! I think Aragorn will have plenty of 'healers' taking care of him.

Grey Wonderer · 20 June 2008 · Chapter 2: Safeguarded

So the nasty rain didn't wait! Now things may be even worse but I am glad the twins were the ones sent to get Aragorn. I loved Legolas's wording of 'the truth' here. Very clever folk, Elves. And so like Frodo to remember to thank the horse for his part in all of it.

Grey Wonderer · 20 June 2008 · Chapter 1: Without Warning

I've had this one on my 'wish to read' list for a while now and am glad to have a chance to begin it tonight. I like the idea of Frodo to the rescue. I do hope he is in time before the weather turns. In Aragorn's present state bad weather is not at all what he needs.

Pearl Took · 20 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

Oh this is good, shirebound! I love the thinking back over all Aragorn had done and coming to the conclusion that he is thoroughly exhausted. And Frodo's response is just right as well. I love him reminding himself of Gandalf's words about Gollum having a part to play. Wonderful!

Andrea · 20 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

“Why do you need to stay in the tent, Frodo?” Elrohir asked. “Legolas had an idea to explain why Aragorn is here,” Frodo replied. “It’s because Frodo’s sick,” Merry explained, “even if he isn’t. Although he WAS sneezing.” LOL!!! I like cousinly conversations like this one. No real sleep since Lorien? No wonder, Aragorn collapsed! So, he put himself into a healing sleep? That sounds logical. He's one of the greatest among the healers of Middle Earth. And now that Frodo is by his side, he will have all the peace and quiet he needs to recover - and Frodo, too.

Tigger · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

Frodo touched Aragorn’s face and was relieved that it felt neither chilled nor fevered. Aragorn didn’t stir, but Frodo felt that he might know, somehow, that a friend was near. Setting aside troubling thoughts for a time, he took one of the large hands in his own and finally drifted towards sleep. Sigh...Too, too sweet for words. Poor Frodo now having to deal w/his own guilt of realizing that saving him also has a factor into Aragorn's illness...Yes, he would be eased by curling up in the big bed w/Aragorn's hand in his. So...Aragorh sent himself into a healing sleep. Interesting concept and one that's believable. After all, if the last few months and weeks have strenghtened his healing gifts, this would also be one of those underlying ablities/gifts. Every healer has his/her breaking point after all. Loved Pippin wanting to take Anduril and place it where Aragorn would see it when he woke. Yes, few were allowed to handle that particular sword, but I think anyone who had the high regard of Aragorn would be able to touch/handle Anduril w/out anything happening to themselves. Pippin would w/out a doubt be one of those special people. Sigh...So enjoying this and can't wait for the next installment!! :oD

Linda Hoyland · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

I loved the way the twins reminded us of just how much Aragorn has achieved. I hope these great healers will warn the eager to help Hobbits that it is dangerous to try to coax an unconsious person to swallow. As Aragorn cares for so many,it lovely he is now being cared for so devotedly.A lovely chapter.

Esquire_of_Rohan · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

Very good! I am enjoying this.

Larner · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

And I'm certain this joint rest will be healing for both sides. Ah, our Frodo! Aragorn needs your presence now as you needed his, I think. And both shall be better for it in the end.

Dreamflower · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

Frodo and Sam were tireless in trying to think of ways to help. They sat next to the bed and spoke or read softly to him, washed his face, and even tried to coax a bit of broth down his throat. Merry ran errands and messages back and forth between Éomer, Imrahil, and the beech-grove, and Pippin divided his time between standing guard outside the tent next to the King’s standard, which Legolas had brought; patrolling the perimeter of the grove; or visiting the encampment to spend time with the wounded or members of the King’s Guard with whom he had grown quite friendly. Once more you show the individualities of the hobbits, as each responds in his own way to the need to be of help. It was no wonder Frodo was listening in to Elladan's and Elrohir's conversation--I'm sure it worried him a lot to know how much Aragorn had been putting forth! Poor Frodo--something else for him to feel guilty about. But I have a feeling that things will be looking up soon. A lovely chapter, dear!

Lindelea · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

Awww. Your h/c just keeps getting better. I like especially the image of Frodo watching over Aragorn, hoping he knows a friend is near.

Jay of Lasgalen · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

I'm really enjoying this, and the characterisations of all concerned. Somehow I can't be too worried about Aragorn if his brothers are caring for him! Jay

lbilover · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

Until you had Elladan and Elrohir list all the sleepless days and exertions Aragorn had, I never realized exactly how exhausted he must have been! Poor Strider. But he's in the best of hands, isn't he?

pebbles66 · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

So sweet, Frodo being so concerned about Aragorn! I know it hurts your wrists to type, so I'm doubly grateful for the update!

Cairistiona · 19 June 2008 · Chapter 4: By the Fire

Ah, another installment and so much packed into this one. It was worth waiting for. The hobbits are doing what hobbits do best, caring for their friends, and what a picture this evokes--all the hustle and bustle, and poor Aragorn in the midst of it all, dead (well, nearly) to all of it. It shows how exhausted and ill he really is, for I don't see Aragorn as being a deep sleeper under normal conditions. I like the idea that he put himself into the healing sleep ... but I'm with Sam--two weeks would be a bit much! And the twins, seeing their younger brother in a new light--their thoughts on how he has passed tests that they have not, and their re-evaluation of him--it's definitely an epiphany moment for them. You can see in Elladan's thoughtful comments that they finally see Aragorn fully as Elesser, King of Gondor, and know he has been found worthy in all ways. It's a very moving moment. And too, I enjoyed seeing Frodo's thoughts on what had happened after the breaking of the Fellowship. I would imagine the full tale would be a bit shocking for him to take in, and discovering that after all the trials, Aragorn then had to muster forth all his power to save him would be very humbling. Such a bond those two have! I'm glad you're exploring it with this and look forward to more.

AspenJules · 4 June 2008 · Chapter 1: Without Warning

Ohhhhhhhhh, this was NICE!!! Dizzy, vomiting Aragorn... Frodo, shouting Noro Lim to Roheryn, and Roheryn looking to his Master. Beautiful countryside, good food, friendly banter.... I can't wait for the next chapter, but I'm going to make myself get some stuff done before I'm allowed... got to make it laaaaaaast!

Cairistiona · 2 June 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

Ah, they're getting things ready to care for poor exhausted Aragorn! I always figured there had to be a moment when, after all he had done and been through, Aragorn finally 'hit the wall', so to speak, and just utterly collapsed, so your explanation of his illness definitely works. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Althea · 1 June 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

Poor exhausted Strider. He worked so hard to bring the Hobbits back to health that he damaged his own; however, I know he's going to be very well tended. His brothers and friends love him dearly. The new king could not be in better hands, especially with eager and determined Hobbits doing everything in their power to help him get well. This is delightful.

Andrea · 1 June 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

Of course Frodo has to stay in that tent as long as Aragorn! I loved it that it was Sam who first came to that conclusion! What would they do without him? I also liked the idea that Gimli built a special tent, including the furniture, for the four hobbits. And I'm quite sure he would be able to make Gandalf a new hat if he were asked to do so :) Poor Aragorn, though! He put all his strength in healing others, and now he has not enough of his powers left for himself. But he has his brothers and four hobbits to care for him! He will make it :)

Linda Hoyland · 1 June 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

Just as I guessed,poor Aragorn is suffering from exaustion.I'm enjoying this very much.

Lily Baggins · 31 May 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

Oh my... I may die at the adorableness of this, Shirebound! Absolutely, positively, if I could transport myself to the "hobbit tent" and watch the goings on from the corner, I'd be the happiest person on the planet. Is there anything better than hobbits banding together to care for someone they love? They are SO resourceful here---putting beds together, grabbing blankets---and oh, I so love Merry's quickness to back Eomer up and Pippin's steadfastness. And I can't even begin to describe how much I adore Frodo here---completely selfless, concerned Frodo. But of course I'm purely SADDENED and UPSET that it appears Frodo will have to stay in the tent with Aragorn and cannot leave, lest anyone find out what the real story is. Oh, so sad that Frodo must stay there---I'm sure all of the readers will find it a hardship to see him comforting Aragorn. :) And guh---a marvelous explanation of everything Aragorn has endured. It's so lovely to imagine him ill and spent as a result of his incessant care. I am a puddle of goo on reading about him wrapping Frodo and Sam in blankets and caring for them so tenderly. That was perfection! I adored this chapter so much!!!

Lindelea · 31 May 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

Ah, I see I left a review at "Shelter". But I truly don't remember the story, so it will be a delight anew to read it. And now the tug-of-warring dog has nipped the youngest hobbit (accidentally, but such things can happen during a rousing tug-of-war) and I must go.

Lindelea · 31 May 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

Aw. I love Pippin's teasing, and Merry's stating the obvious to long-suffering Gandalf. I am distracted by the delighted growls of a tug-of-warring dog in the other room, or I'd pick out more favourite bits. Your explanation of Aragorn's illness makes sense. I shall have to read "Shelter" -- I don't recall reading it before.

Tigger · 31 May 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

Oh Shirebound...I've never thought of it before, but when you combine what he did in Minas Tirth calling back Faramir, Eowyn and Merry, then going to the Black Gate and then calling Frodo and Sam back, as well as making sure their healing sleep really was a healing sleep...Just one of those things would mentally and physically exhaust a person. No wonder Aragorn became so sick so fast once everything had calmed down around Cormallen into routine. There's also the grief for Halbarad and his wrenching of the Palantir to his will away from Sauron as well. That also would have sapped Aragorn's strength. It's just like whenever we have too much emotional and/or physical upheaval happen in our own lives. Once everything starts to calm down and return to normal, that's usually when everything's that's happened, tends to hit you hard. Thank Goodness the Twins are there, as well as our beloved hobbits. If anyone can get Aragorn back on the mend, it's our wonderful four Travellers. Bring on the Comfort now!! BTW...Dare I hope to see at some point Aragorn needing added warmtn around him and so ends up in the middle of a Hobbit Huddle? Huh...Huhhuhhuhhuh? :oD Can't wait to find out what happens next!! :o)

Pearl Took · 31 May 2008 · Chapter 3: Sanctuary

Sorry I'm late arriving. Off to a wonderful start as always, shirebound!!