Heirs of Gondor by Aelaer
Dreamflower · 11 June 2008 · Chapter 2: After the Council
This is a very likely conversation--I can just see all these thoughts going through Boromir's mind--and I am sure Aragorn's admission that he once lived in Gondor is going to worry him like a dog with a bone... And I like his ambivalence about Aragorn's return. This rang very true.
shirebound · 11 June 2008 · Chapter 2: After the Council
It's interesting to see how much Boromir appreciates that he and Faramir have different talents and ways of finding out things.
6336 · 10 June 2008 · Chapter 1: First Meeting
If Boromir had a fault it was his pride in and love of Gondor. The Ring took this and used it to it's advantage until his own sense of honour broke through it's blandishments and showed him the truth, everything It touched It corrupted! Lynda
Dreamflower · 10 June 2008 · Chapter 1: First Meeting
A very good start, and I look forward to seeing who else's POV you capture! I like Aragorn's startlement at realizing how many years have passed since he last saw Boromir! It's true Boromir fell to the Ring, but his fall was a brief one, and necessary. And of course, he more than made amends for his lapse.
shirebound · 10 June 2008 · Chapter 1: First Meeting
So that is Boromir. Even through his weariness I can sense his pride and strength. I like this, and look forward to more.
harrowcat · 10 June 2008 · Chapter 1: First Meeting
Congrats on your graduation. Looking forward to more of this.