A Secret Gate by Antane
shirebound · 13 July 2008 · Chapter 1: A Secret Gate
That is absolutely beautiful, Antane. And Rose's analogy to a baby being born is wonderful: . "It is very painful and a mite frightening, but at the end, you have this beautiful new being."
Author's reply
Thank you so much, dear shirebound! Glad all the angst didn't scare you off! :) Namarie, God bless, *hugs*, Antane :)
harrowcat · 13 July 2008 · Chapter 1: A Secret Gate
Beautiful as always Antane. Fitting that Rosie sees the furthest at this moment and the birthing image is lovely. One small typo - well if her heart had already been tied to Sam. I think you mean 'Had not'.
Author's reply
Yeah, I noticed that little/big typo later and fixed it. Hantanyel, dear harrowcat, for another lovely review. :) Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Armariel · 13 July 2008 · Chapter 1: A Secret Gate
Sweet! Love the birthing image.:):):) ~~~{~@
Larner · 13 July 2008 · Chapter 1: A Secret Gate
That Rosie can see what Frodo and Sam cannot as yet is excellent, as is the metaphor of giving birth. They will see one day, however.
Author's reply
Hantanyel, my dear Larner - so glad you enjoyed! This was a neat one to write. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)