The Storm by Linda Hoyland
Edlyn · 30 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
Oh, this was gorgeous and very sexy and romantic to boot! I can just see Aragorn in the rain (what a piece of eye candy!). I certainly envy Arwen . Your descriptions are soi very good!
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed my story. I would love to have been in that garden with Arwen!
harrowcat · 29 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
Very vivid Linda. I like Arwen chellenging Aragorn's ranger skills! :) BTW I am following your re-writes etc on the other site but i don't like reviewing there.
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you enjoyed this story and are enjoying my rewrites.Thank you for letting me know.
Estelcontar · 27 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
Lovely story Linda. The fact that Aragorn earned for shelter and comfort in his days in the wild, and now that he has both earns for the freedom of the outside is very life like. Aragorn and Arwen dancing in the storm, what a vivid and joyful scene.
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story.I agree the grass is always greener on the other side of the fence!
shirebound · 27 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
I'm glad Aragorn and Arwen can revel in nature's pulsing wildness... and their own. :)
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I like to imagine Aragorn and Arwen so happy together!
Calenlass Greenleaf · 27 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
*drools slightly* Bad of me, but…images of a half-dressed Aragorn does that to me. Love the romance in this. It’s sweet but not sappy, and the storm was a nice touch. ~Cal
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you liked the story.I don't write much romance,so I'm pleased this worked for you.
Ainu Laire · 27 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
Aww! What a cute, romantic one shot. I do like it quite a bit. One small correction. You put "peredhil"; it should be "peredhel" (peredhel is singular while peredhil is plural, and in the context singular is the one you want). Cheers!
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you liked the story.Thank you too for the correction,which I've put in.I'm always pleased when people tell me about typos.
Raksha The Demon · 26 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
A passionate story - nice to see the King and Queen getting out and really enjoying Nature!
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I think they are experiencing Nature in all her varieties! I'm pleased you enjoyed the story.
Radbooks · 26 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
Very nice images!
Author's reply
Thank you! I'm pleased you liked it.
Larner · 26 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
A wonderful interlude between the two of them! So delightful!
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you liked the story.
6336 · 26 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
I can understand how Aragorn could feel trapped in his new life, instead of just leaving when he feels like it he now has to let his 'nannies' know where he is going. Arwen probably is not as affected having lived a more normal life in Imlardris. Like most newly weds, just can't keep their hands off each other can they? Shakes head! More please, Lynda
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm delighted you enjoyed this.I fear poor Aragorn must be driven mad at times by the restrictions upon him now! I hope my Aragorn and Arwen Muses will co-operate again soon.There is an angsty scene between them in my other new story,"Dies Iare."
Lady_Roisin · 26 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
I am adding this to my favorite stories on here I loved it so much. :-) Dancing in the rain is the best! Great job!
Author's reply
Thank you, I'm delighted you enjoyed it so much!
RS · 26 September 2008 · Chapter 1: If after every tempest come such calms
"Impulsively, he peeled off his tunic and shirt, allowing the rain to run freely down his bare chest and back."......"half naked and dripping" OH MY! You have no clue what those phrases did to me. I have a very vivid imagination! I LOVE THIS! It is such a delight to have these two frolick around like this...no cares in the world. This of course is playing in my mind like a very romantic scene in a movie! I wonder what a typhoon would do to my favorite Ranger?
Author's reply
Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm delighted you enjoyed this.It always makes my day to know I have given pleasure to someone! I admit,I'd love to see this as a film too!