Reviews (12)

Stefania · 8 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Justice, and only justice, you shall pursue.

Hi Linda Goodness gracious, white slavery in Gondor! Good action in this story, Linda. It made me hope you would soon favor us with a juicy long story, perhaps with the "dark' tone that you started here. I just finished Alison Weir's "The Wars of the Roses," which is a non-fiction account of this troubled time in British history. Even as late as the 15th century, women were held in little regard. I doubt that Warwick the King Maker, King Edward IV, and his brother, soon to become Richard III, would have even thought much about how prostitutes in their land came to be in their sad situation. It's nice to think that your Faramir and your Aragorn have more noble (and more modern) attitudes toward the plight of women sold into sexual slavery. And I agree, the last sentence "rocked!" Pretty please give us a new long angsty story. - Steff

Virtuella · 8 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Justice, and only justice, you shall pursue.

Isn't it nice to see such formidable men being slower on the uptake than oneself? :D Well, it all ended the way it should, but you went out with a bang, because that last sentence is *hilarious*!

Estelcontar · 7 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Justice, and only justice, you shall pursue.

Trust Aragorn and Faramir to see justice done in the realm they so wisely ruled.

harrowcat · 7 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Justice, and only justice, you shall pursue.

I do love courtly justice.

inzilbeth · 7 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Justice, and only justice, you shall pursue.

It's good to see the law of Gondor been so magnificently upheld by an outraged Faramir. And a most satisfying conclusion all round.

Raksha The Demon · 6 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Justice, and only justice, you shall pursue.

I would think that Faramir could be terrifying in his anger; and of course one would not want to get on the bad side of Aragorn Elessar Arathornsson Telcontar, no indeedy! Good conclusion to a good story.

Larner · 6 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Justice, and only justice, you shall pursue.

At least they have closed the place down! It would be a surprise to find such places operating openly in their realm, I'd think.

Laikwalâssê · 19 December 2008 · Chapter 1: It was a dark and stormy night

oh dear! and this done to Faramir! I can pretty good imagine how this request would make a decent man like faramir furious. Please update soon. Well written, as always. Thank you. Lai

Estelcontar · 14 December 2008 · Chapter 1: It was a dark and stormy night

A very intriguing beginning though I can guess who Beren and Dior are.

inzilbeth · 14 December 2008 · Chapter 1: It was a dark and stormy night

Something tells me there's more going on here than the obvious. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Larner · 13 December 2008 · Chapter 1: It was a dark and stormy night

Ah--a dark and stormy night, and a seedy inn that panders to the lowest of appetites! I can see how Faramir would find himself angry here!

Raksha The Demon · 13 December 2008 · Chapter 1: It was a dark and stormy night

A fascinating variant on the 'dark and stormy night' theme. And 'Dior' has a predatory-but-pathetic girl wanting to make him happy. There's a mystery here alright! Well written and paced.