Twins in Rohan by Lady Bluejay
Shlain · 23 November 2020 · Chapter 1: First Time
Oh my goodness! I am laughing like crazy. When I first started reading I thought how could an author do this. It is not exactly canon. But now I can see a brave maiden of Rohan doing this. And the twins' dialogue is written so well. Let's blame the wine for the ambiguous meaning in their words. Great job.
Agape4Gondor · 24 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Medseld Hangover
Just re-read this over at HASA. I knew I had seen it before... I love the 'new' title - and I also love the second chapter. Fluid prose makes this special for me. As well as the voices of the twins - I think you have them down perfectly! Blessings and thanks for the twisted laugh!
Author's reply
Thanks - glad I made you laugh, and you came back to read again. LBJ
Larner · 11 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Medseld Hangover
He really should have known! Heh!
Author's reply
Of course he should - especially being an elf! Thanks for reviewing.LBJ
Jay of Lasgalen · 11 January 2009 · Chapter 2: Medseld Hangover
LOL! Poor Elladan - but it serves him right. I hope Elrohir had more sense than to drink too much! Jay
Author's reply
I doubt it! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ
Larner · 10 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
Naughty thoughts are being raised here! Heh! And she thinks she can best an elf? Heh!
Author's reply
Very naughty thoughts - but its all in the mind! Thanks for reviewing. LBJ
Idril Celebrindal · 9 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
OH that was great! Wasn't expecting the ending, more please indeed! Well written drew me in! Thanks for the giggle! Idril
Author's reply
Glad I amused you. Your review is really appreciated. LB J
Simple Girl For You · 9 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
Lady BlueJay, LOVED IT. This was very clever the way you elude and insinuate to something romantic and its something completely different. MORE PLEASE. ;-) Simple Girl For You
Author's reply
I can't promise more but if the muse strikes!Thank you for reviewing. LBJ
Marethiel · 9 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
Cute! Well done. ~Marethiel
Author's reply
Thank you. Your review is much appreciated.LBJ
Laikwalâssê · 9 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
oh how I love this stories leading the reader into an unexpected direction. The twins eagerness for the girls "first time" however made me wonder but the end was hilarious. Really nice little story. Thank you. Lai
Author's reply
If I got you wondering I achieved my aim. Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing. LBJ
6336 · 8 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
Oh, this could be such a naughty little tale if one had a mind that worked that way! Hee, Hee,Hee! Not me though, I'm a good girl I am! More please, Lynda
Author's reply
It's all in the mind - how true. Glad you enjoyed, Thanks for reviewing.LBJ
whitewave · 8 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
You had me guessing as to what she actually wants to do and was very surprised as well with the twins' reaction and apparent willingness. The end just had me laughing out loud. A very nice short piece.
Author's reply
Thank you. Pleased I kept you guessing.LBJ
utfrog · 8 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
I knew it was not going to be the obvious, but you totally "got me." This was great - very, very clever. Thank you
Author's reply
Thank you. Glad I managed to fool you. LBJ
Raksha The Demon · 8 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
Cute and funny; I didn't guess until the end that the twins knew all along what the girl intended.
Author's reply
Ha! Glad I fooled you. Thanks very much for reviewing.LBJ
Parmalokwen · 8 January 2009 · Chapter 1: First Time
I love a good trick ending.
Author's reply
Yes, so do I! Thanks a lot for reviewing. LBJ